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The Last Centurion
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The Last Centurion
The Last Centurion
CHARACTER TITLE OR QUOTE: FOR THE EMPIRE!!!
Basic Biography |
Real Name: James Canter Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: The Last Centurion Title: i will keep my honor till my last breath Alignment: renegade Age: 27 Gender:male Race:american Hair:dark brown Eyes:turqoise Height:6 foot Weight:200 pounds Blood type:a |
The Looks Either include pictures in Spoilers, a smaller picture/s for the profile, or a very detailed description of your characters physical appearance and costume. |
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The Legacy |
Personality:calm and always in control History: he was a commander in the days of the romans and was highly respected by Ceaser himself.He was BORN to lead, he knows all of the old fighting stratiges of the romans, and a couple of greek strategies. unfortunatly, he was cursed as a child , the curse greatly reduces his abilities whilst in moonlight.Unexpectedly was transported to 2015 with newfound super powers/abilities, although his memories were mostly wiped, except for the eccentials |
The Powers and Weaknesses |
(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.) Powers Power 1: the power of achilles it enhances everything he can do 100 fold but if he gets hit on his weak point he immediatly dies Power 2: the wisdom of solomon it makes him smarter and more stronger in mind Weakness(es) Weakness 1:the moon, he was cursed, further info in his history Weakness 2: achilles heel, weak point is the bottom of his foot http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=2&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0CC4QFjAB&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.merriam-webster.com%2Fdictionary%2Fachilles%2527%2520heel&ei=bxZMVYnnLsGYsAXbg4GgCA&usg=AFQjCNGIM_SyNh8YV_W_2oP-yjBXxl5bLA&sig2=98pZZg8oWFLzzswyzGklaA&bvm=bv.92765956,d.b2w RP Mechanics he is a heavy but strong character RP Mechanic(s): he has a spear and he also uses a roman sword Items/Minions Physical Priority (You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.) endurance strength reaction agility |
Last edited by TheLastCenturion on May 8th 2015, 6:45 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : to make it be acceptable)
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Quote : if i am destinded to end here, my soul will will not be in vain
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Number of posts : 4
Humor : i know not of this concept
Registration date : 2015-05-07
Re: The Last Centurion
Change the name of this thread to the name of your character.
For the name and quote sections at the top, you'll want to replace them with the actual character's name and quote.
Move your first image so that it's next to your second one.
Your personality and history sections need to be longer. Mainly the history part. A couple of paragraphs will do.
You need to describe what your powers do, specifically the healing power. Same with the weaknesses.
Finally you use the priorities listed in the template and list how they're prioritized.
For the name and quote sections at the top, you'll want to replace them with the actual character's name and quote.
Move your first image so that it's next to your second one.
Your personality and history sections need to be longer. Mainly the history part. A couple of paragraphs will do.
You need to describe what your powers do, specifically the healing power. Same with the weaknesses.
Finally you use the priorities listed in the template and list how they're prioritized.
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Re: The Last Centurion
is this good?
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Re: The Last Centurion
@bliss so whats wrong w/ it
TheLastCenturion- Status :
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Re: The Last Centurion
First of all don't double post. You made me lose my first post because of it. If that happens again, I'll ban you.
Second of all everything else. You can't have a power give you 100 fold when I don't know what the character can do. You say he's smart. What else can he do? This character is very incomplete.
The powers raise more questions than answers.
The personality and history are both incomplete. I don't like the personality or history because they don't feel complete. When I'm looking at this character, I'm asking will this character enhance my site. Right now, it will not because of the lack of attention given to the details.
Second of all everything else. You can't have a power give you 100 fold when I don't know what the character can do. You say he's smart. What else can he do? This character is very incomplete.
The powers raise more questions than answers.
The personality and history are both incomplete. I don't like the personality or history because they don't feel complete. When I'm looking at this character, I'm asking will this character enhance my site. Right now, it will not because of the lack of attention given to the details.
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Humor : [16:00:27] devistation : bliss you only bann me because you are scared you use your moderator powers to get rid of people u know is right but hate because they are right but if anything there is treatment for your disease of being scared of better people so you should go by some have fun bye bye
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