Fate

Real Name: Drake Storm
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Fate
Title: The Fire Star
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Green
Height: 6.1 feet
Weight: 83 kg
Blood type: Type O


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Personality: Drake is an easy going character who loves to hang out with his mates and is also a bit of a ladies man. He can be self-centered but still cares about his friends and other people around him. Takes things as a bit of a joke.

History:His parents where keen astronauts and where exposed to a high dosage of radiation from a star that was unbearably hot on one side and ultra cold on the other. Then 18 months later they had twins Drake Storm and Katrina Storm, but they paid a high price with their mother dying shortly after giving birth.

Drakes and Katrina's dad took them to Los Angeles wanting to start a new life, leaving his profession of space behind him. The pain too hard to continue without his wife. Drake and Katrina had a normal upbringing and were quite popular kids always hanging out with the in crowd. Drake was the best basketballer the country had probably ever seen and Katrina a hot cheerleader.

But it all changed the day they went to school on their 17th birthday.(Katrina's history will be revealed another day) Drake arrived at school and went to class like usual, but everything changed at lunchtime. A criminal came into the school to hold everyone hostage, with a big sub-machine gun everyone did as he was told. He grabbed a random high school student who just happened to be Drakes girlfriend. He took his cellphone out of his pocket and dialed the police asking for 2 million dollars in ten minutes and diplomatic immunity, 'if not the girl dies' he said. The ten minutes where up the gun came up...and whoosh a stream of fire came out of Drakes hand and his whole body came alight. The criminal screamed as the melted metal came into contact with his skin. A new hero was born...

The police came into the building wanting to ask people questions while the criminal was rushed to the hospital. The cops asked how the gun was melted and everyone said it came out of Drakes hand, but the cops thought everyone had lost their minds and put it down to trauma.

Drake started training as soon as he got home he wanted to recreate that life changing experience. He got home went into his room and started flicking his fingers and yelling flame on like The Human Torch, but to no avail. He sat down and concentrated on his hand and whoosh his hand became alight. He laughed like a maniac with joy, he was a super hero.

Fate melted the bullet in mid air and with blistering speed delivered a searing uppercut into the criminal. He laid him on the ground as he heard the police cars in the distance. He jumped as a voice was heard behind him.
"Hello Drake" said the voice, "We have heard of your unbelievable powers and want you to join our hero team The Royals"
"Don't you think you should have a cool name like Hells Rivals or Brink of Destruction" Drake retorted.
"We are who we are, we'll see you at Room 21 at The Palms Hotel" the voice instructed.
"Ok, see ya Mr Monotone".
Fate launched himself into the air.


Power(s):His heart is a miniature star that can change his whole body into star fire. He can shoot streams and balls of fire. His maximum output has not been fully tested, but he boasts he can get as hot as the sun saying he doesn't want to try or the world will die (but I wouldn't believe him). He can create a solid form of fire which he can use to create blades and objects like armour (like the one in the photo). Since he is  basically a star his powers can be used in space. He can generate massive amounts of thrust that enable him to fly, travelling at 250mph. The massive amounts of thrust also allow him to be incredibly durable and strong. Whatever clothes he is wearing become part of his body and do not disintegrate on this transformation. He is also is immune to fire and heat.


Grid:30
Intelligence:2
Strength:3
Speed:6
Durability:6
Ability:
       Star Flame manipulation:6
      Flame Transformation:2
Fighting Skills:3
Flight:2
Wealth:1

Why are you only using 22 points?

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He cannot control other peoples fire powers.

He cannot fly faster than his speed allows.

He cannot go into space without high enough DUR to withstand it.

I would merge your "Star Fire" and "Solid Fire Manip" together as one power, however.

I do enjoy the way you've made him out to be; a heart made out of a star. It's quite unique. However, you need to keep in mind that it's an RP Mechanic and it does not make him some sort of God. Also, you have low DUR so he's very weak unless he runs away, etc.


Also! Your fire manip, of course, could have the ability to create fire weapons. That's fine.

So, give him 8 ABI in Fire Manipulation; and you can name your fire power whatever you like.

Thanks for the help Chelli
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