Mikk Gray "Great Guppy"

Real Name: Michael "Mikk" Gray
Hero Name: Great Guppy
Title: none
Alignment: Lawful Good
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Undetermined
Hair: Reddish-Brown
Eyes: Blue
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 215lbs
Blood type: unidentifiable

Character Image/Character Costume Image (Or Description): I will try and post a picture but I'm on a mobile device- He is muscular and toned with a slightly thick neck, and big arms, chest, and shoulders, skinny midsection. Hair is a darker reddish brown, almost chestnut fading into lighter more reddish short trimmed beard, his hair is very short on the sides going up to a disheveled swept back look on top. His suit top is burnt orange thin skin-tight nylon top, 3/4 sleeve, with double mesh (not see through) sides and hood and a silver trident emblem over his left beast. Bottom is rich darker blue skin-tight nylon 3/4 length and same blue water shoes. He has a silver decorative belt and carries a silver trident, and blue wrist cuffs with small fins on top, and screens on bottom for his communications, gps, ect.

Personality: Chivalrous, Honorable, not always serious. Mikk has been fighting since he started walking, his brothers not willing to give him any breaks. He tends to be quiet sometimes but is generally considered a nice guy, he can be very compassionate, but when he is in fight mode, wether that means in the martial arts gym, live battle he is always focused, if not a bit brutal. When he feels he needs to do something he will get it done at almost any cost to himself.

History: Michael was always considered to be a "bit strange" by his peers, not to say he wasn't well liked, but he certainly wasn't ever "popular" due in part to the fact that he always spoke out against bullies and stuck up for the little guy not only because it was the right thing to do but also because he could, due in part to his abnormal Speed, strength and exceptional toughness. It wasn't until he spoke up to the wrong group that he found himself to be more than what he appeared to be on the surface. It all happened when he was designated driving for his friends. He came to the defense of a group of, yet unknown to him, Meta's roughing up a helpless college student, he held off the attackers long enough for the girl to get away, before being subdued, chained, weighed, and thrown off of a nearby bridge into a early winters river. He sunk, struggling, to the bottom of the cold, dark river with only the thought of the student in his mind, and the satisfaction that even if he was to die that night, at least she would get to go home safe. As the time ticked on and his chest started to burn and his vision faded to black the panic set in he lurched against the chains, chest and throat pulsing involuntarily, he knew he had no more time, his vision was all but gone now. His chest convulsed and he sucked in a breath of the cold river water inflating out was over. To his surprise, it immediately revitalized him. As he continued to breath the water he felt stronger than ever, with each breath brought the strange sensation of comfort he had never known he was missing and strength he never knew he had. He heaved his self against the chains and they broke away like petty layers of masking tape. He swam as fast as he could towards the surface, so fast in fact that he shot out of the water, and landed on his face on the bridge twenty feet above the surface of the river. He then turned on the group of Metas, staring the fight that followed was easy to him, giving him a new sense of power and a new sense of direction. Inspired by his feats and spurred on by his "pet name" he would become The Great Guppy

Power(s): Great Guppy is completely adapted to underwater survivability and living, this means;
Superhuman Strength (6)
Superhuman Speed (5)
Durability to survive the deepest reaches of the ocean (8)
and the ability to breath water (ability 1)
These abilities have also allowed him to train to unnaturally high levels with martial arts to the point that he is a master with his trident, and just as deadly without. (6)

Grid: 30
Intelligence: 4
Occult: 0
Strength: 6
Speed: 5
Durability: 8
Ability: 1/ waterbreathing
Fighting Skills: 6
Magic: 0
Spells: 0
Flight: 0
Wealth: 1

This is my first attempt at this whole shebang, please let me know if I did anything wrong and I will correct it, thank you

You just need to spent 1 point in ability for the water survival power. You should also mention the superhuman strength, speed and durability in the powers section. Once that's done this is good to go.

Will do Boss, thanks I'm excited to get started

Seems you haven't done what Forcie suggested.

Mind working on that? :]

I'm sorry I typed up the changes before but something must have gone wrong when I was entering it, it should be better now.

The first point in wealth is free so you have 29 points currently spent. If you want you can add 1 more to the grid. If not this is good to go.

alright I added that point back to fight skill, so I'm good? and thank you guys for all your help.

Approved and moved.