James Harper Nightboy ( The Dark Arrow)

by **Bone_Crusher** December 16th 2012, 12:49 pm

Real Name: James Harper
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Nightboy
Title: The Dark Arrow
Alignment: Neutral
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Blue
Height: 6ft1
Weight: 140 lbs
Blood type: O+

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Personality:
James is a very naïve boy, as he has not seen much of the outside world. He doesn't care who he hurts as long as he gets his revenge. However he does get emotional attached to people if he cares for them to long. He is very smart due to when he was experimented on he watched the scientist perform many experiments most the time for weapons. He is very cocky due to his age he thinks he could take on the world if it came down to it. He is very driven to get revenge for himself.

History:
James was a well off child since his father was the CEO of the firm Harp Corp. It was worth a high amount of money 1.7 billion. So James got everything he wanted. When he was 7 years old his mother died in a plane crash and ever since this happened his father changed. He started to drink and abuse his James. after 4 years is father then began to spend all his time to his research on genetic mutation trying to enhance the human potential. However he needed to perform a human trial and no one would do it. So he kidnapped his own son and forced him to take the drug at first it stopped his heart beat for 10 minuets, he then sprung back to life and started to fight all the guards with his genetically enhanced strength. But because he was so young then pinned him to the floor and stuck him in a test chamber. Then the test began after a few long days then started to train the kid for the military as a super soldier. they taught him a couple martial arts over the 7 years and because of his super intelligence he mastered them very quickly. the martial arts where

Marine Corps Martial Arts
S.C.A.R.S.

They gave his many weapons such as a bow and arrow and trained him how to use it very well. He could see very far away due to his genetic mutation. His speed was very fast for a human as he could run up to 40 miles per hour. His super strength could mean at his peak he could lift 50 tons and due to being abused at a young age and all trough his life he could take a fair bit of abuse.

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When he turned 19 he decided he needed to escape and destroy everyone who hurt him. So after seeing to escape from his cell he needed a guards hand print he called him over to ask to go to the toilet, the guard came over unlocked his cell cuffed him and dragged him out. James then slipped his hands between the guards hands pulling up with great force breaking the guards hand. Covering his mouth he lowered him tot he floor. Then he used a the martial art of scar to hit the CNS to cripple the guard and knocking him out. Slipping on his uniform he dragged the guard into a laundry bin. Walking to the weapons locket he took his uniform and his bow and arrows, slipping into his uniform he jumped up onto the railing on the roof. Sneaking past the guards he silently dropped down and pinched the key card from the guards pocket. after finding his way out he notices four guards are covering the exit. He drops down from the railing and draws his bow. Quickly removing one of his arrows from his quiver and shooting an arrow into the neck of the guard the blood from his neck spurted into the mask of the guard in front of him making it so it could not see. Running towards the two other guards trying to call for back up he slides down and kicks them both in the leg knocking them to the ground. He then used his knowledge of Marine Corps Martial Arts to disarm them both and pulling his own knife from his leg sheath he ripped it into one of the guards head slicing it off then he lifted off from the guard. Sending a kick to the other guards face knocking him out. Then slowly walking to the guard trying to take his helmet off he pushed down on his neck pressure point making the guard go into a spasm. Pushing down his key card in the slot the door clicked open he then darted out into the city of New York.

Grid:
Intelligence:6
Occult:0
Strength:6
Speed:4
Durability:4
Ability:1
Fighting Skills:5
Magic:0
Spells:0
Potency:0
Flight:0
Wealth:4

by **Chellizard** December 16th 2012, 1:01 pm

My main thing about your stats is this:

You have roughly 24 fighting styles listed, yet you only have 5 FS; you're only eligible to know 1 or 2 fighting styles on a master-level.

For heightened senses, including amazing eye sight, that's 1 point in Ability.

I'd like for you to explain a bit more of his history; pick one or two of the fighting styles or about five that he "knows" but hasn't yet mastered and tell a historic-story of his past of him having to use the fighting style, or the encounters he had with learning the styles.

Also, I understand that he has 6 INT; but he's only 18. I doubt any 18 year old would be able to learn 24+ fighting styles.

So, pick 2 to master, or 4-5 to know decent moves in and give me some more history. Everything else looks fine.