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Duplex
Real Name
Johan "JC" Criado
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name
Multiplex
Title
N/A
Alignment
Villain
Age
29
Gender
Male
Race
Puerto Rican
Hair
Light Brown Reddish
Eyes
Gunmetal Gray
Height
5”10”
Weight
185lbs
Costume Description/Image
Johan is a psychopath, but at the same time his is intelligent. He cares little to none for the life of anyone else. People find him to be insane, but he thinks himself to be an independent thinker unless of course he is in court. Then he plays the card that he is insane, which has prevented him from getting the death penalty multiple times. He is a very persuasive person, almost always being able to talk himself out of a situation, with a deal, or some other situation. Johan uses his mouth to help him achieve things. He can be persuasive; he is a great liar, and a smooth talker. His personality is really all over the place. He can be tough and gritty or a complete hyperactive person. One thing that always remains the same is his love to kill. Any excuse he gets to kill is a good one for him. That's why he became involved in espionage and other special ops types of business. Of course he ended up getting burned, but was able to talk his way into getting a steady income from them so he would keep his mouth shut about the business they made him do.
History
Johan was born into what seemed to be a normal family. He had a twin brother named Javier Criado. Their dad's name is Jorge Criado and their mother's name is Jessica Criado. Both of parents were college professors or that's what Johan thought when he was a kid. Javier was the one that was older by a few minutes, but Johan would always assume the leader role of the two. In school they both were top students, but Javier always had some edge over Johan. Even though Johan wasn't dumb, Javier was always more of the brains of the two. In seventh grade Johan and Javier were walking home from school. Johan was messing with Javier and took his hat. Javier would catch Johan and gave him a hard punch in the arm. When he did this, Javier literally punched a second Johan out of him. The three of them were in utter shock and had no idea what to do. Johan and the clone went to touch hands and he absorbed the clone back in. Then the two immediately went home and did not tell their parents anything. The two started having a discussion about both of them not being normal. Javier fessed up about why he always beat him academically and gave theory about what happened to Johan. Javier wanted to test Johan's ability again so he convinced him to Johan to let him punch him. Johan gave in and Javier punched him. Johan fell back right onto the clone that popped out by mistake. Javier and Johan decided to keep this whole thing a secret. They continued on with their lives. Senior year in high school both decided that they wanted to become part of the CIA. As they continued on to college both would send in their applications. Both were informed that they were hired. When they went in for their first day, they were greeted by their parents who explained to them that they were undercover CIA operatives. They found out that they have always been watching over them and they knew about the talents of both Javier and Johan. Both were taught many essential aspects of being a CIA officer. They also helped Johan get a better handle of his powers and Javier started to develop weapons and other tech for them. Both of them were sent on their first mission together. The mission ended with Johan having to kill the target. He did so and after that day he was really never the same. For him missions became more about killing than anything. As time went on, Johan racked up more and more kills. He started to go against orders and everything. This eventually led to Johan and Javier getting into a fight. Both of them were even in fighting ability so it ended in a draw because other operatives restrained Johan. Johan ended up getting burned and that really sent him off the deep end. He started babbling on how he would not stay shut unless they paid him to. The CIA with their hands tied agreed. Johan ended up stealing his ops suit and got away. Now he just travels around as an assassin for hire, a mercenary, or a crime lord.
Powers
He can create a near perfect duplicate of himself, and all items on his person, meaning weapons, clothing etc. He does this through absorbing kinetic energy, meaning when he snaps his fingers, claps, stomps on the ground, etc. This ability does not protect him from the pain or injuries of any impact, it only powers his ability. He is able to control through will, whether he wants to produce clones or not so that he does not produce a clone by mistake. The clone is a tangible person and has the same personality and thought process as the original. The original Duplex cannot hive mind or communicate telepathically with the other clone, so this makes the clone in a way an independent person. Only the original is able to produce the duplicate and absorb the duplicate back into himself through touch, and would gain the knowledge, skills, etc that the duplicate may have learned. When the clone is killed, it dissolves away enabling Duplex to create another. He is limited to only creating 1 other duplicate at once near perfectly.
Along with being a superb fighter, Johan is also a highly skilled marksman with ranged weapons and throwing knives. He became highly proficient in hand to hand, armed to unarmed, and armed to armed combat. He of course has his own fighting style that is highly unorthodox and unpredictable, which makes him such a deadly foe.
Power Grid
INT: 4
STR: 2
SPD: 2
END: 2
EP: 6
FS: 6
(Clone's Grid)
INT: 4
STR: 2
SPD: 2
END: 1
EP: 0
FS: 6
Power Grid colours
Pink/violet and grey
Character Image/Description
The nice nighttime breeze rolled by off of the coast of Malibu, Cali. The wind would go through Duplex's hair as he was standing on top of the roof of one of them large houses that were just overlooking the beach and the ocean. He would nonchalantly walk down the slanted part of the roof. He reached the edge of the roof and right below him on the porch of the second floor there was a man standing there. The man was wearing a suit, a pretty expensive one too. He also held a fully auto and he was wearing an earpiece. This man was a body guard of course, but for who? It was really no one important, just a pretty powerful crime lord is all. Duplex would drop down silently behind the bodyguard that was looking out at the ocean. Duplex went ahead and snapped the man's neck, taking him out. Duplex would then turn around and open the double doors that were in front of him, leading him into the bedroom of this crime lord. No one else was in the room except for them two. Duplex would walk up to the doors that led into this man's room and locked them both. Duplex would walk over to his bedside and pull out one of his swords and slowly run it down the man's face as it cut his cheek. This man jumped up to look at who it was.
"Who the hell are you!?"
"Heh.. no one special really."
"Wha-What do you want!?"
"Oh it's not about what I want, no. It's your brother actually. He says... hold on"
Duplex would rummage through his multiple pockets. The man who was still in bed was about to call out for help, but Duplex would hit him right in the throat with the hilt of his sword, making him incapable of speaking for the time being. Finally Duplex would pull out a pretty wrinkled folded up piece of paper. He would open it up and read off it.
"Quote. Hey bro. Thanks for dying and leaving the business to me. See you in hell. End quote."
Those would be the last words heard by this crime lord as Duplex would go and slash right through his neck. Duplex would then proceed over to the locked doors and would unlock them. He would open the door and stab the two guards that were in front of him. Duplex's plan was to use the front door to make his "escape". Throughout the house, all that was heard were gunshots and people's bodies hitting the floor. The front door would then open, with Duplex walking out through the front door and hopping into one of the nice cars that was out in front of the house. He hot wired it and then made his way out of the place.
Johan "JC" Criado
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name
Multiplex
Title
N/A
Alignment
Villain
Age
29
Gender
Male
Race
Puerto Rican
Hair
Light Brown Reddish
Eyes
Gunmetal Gray
Height
5”10”
Weight
185lbs
Costume Description/Image
- Spoiler:
Johan is a psychopath, but at the same time his is intelligent. He cares little to none for the life of anyone else. People find him to be insane, but he thinks himself to be an independent thinker unless of course he is in court. Then he plays the card that he is insane, which has prevented him from getting the death penalty multiple times. He is a very persuasive person, almost always being able to talk himself out of a situation, with a deal, or some other situation. Johan uses his mouth to help him achieve things. He can be persuasive; he is a great liar, and a smooth talker. His personality is really all over the place. He can be tough and gritty or a complete hyperactive person. One thing that always remains the same is his love to kill. Any excuse he gets to kill is a good one for him. That's why he became involved in espionage and other special ops types of business. Of course he ended up getting burned, but was able to talk his way into getting a steady income from them so he would keep his mouth shut about the business they made him do.
History
Johan was born into what seemed to be a normal family. He had a twin brother named Javier Criado. Their dad's name is Jorge Criado and their mother's name is Jessica Criado. Both of parents were college professors or that's what Johan thought when he was a kid. Javier was the one that was older by a few minutes, but Johan would always assume the leader role of the two. In school they both were top students, but Javier always had some edge over Johan. Even though Johan wasn't dumb, Javier was always more of the brains of the two. In seventh grade Johan and Javier were walking home from school. Johan was messing with Javier and took his hat. Javier would catch Johan and gave him a hard punch in the arm. When he did this, Javier literally punched a second Johan out of him. The three of them were in utter shock and had no idea what to do. Johan and the clone went to touch hands and he absorbed the clone back in. Then the two immediately went home and did not tell their parents anything. The two started having a discussion about both of them not being normal. Javier fessed up about why he always beat him academically and gave theory about what happened to Johan. Javier wanted to test Johan's ability again so he convinced him to Johan to let him punch him. Johan gave in and Javier punched him. Johan fell back right onto the clone that popped out by mistake. Javier and Johan decided to keep this whole thing a secret. They continued on with their lives. Senior year in high school both decided that they wanted to become part of the CIA. As they continued on to college both would send in their applications. Both were informed that they were hired. When they went in for their first day, they were greeted by their parents who explained to them that they were undercover CIA operatives. They found out that they have always been watching over them and they knew about the talents of both Javier and Johan. Both were taught many essential aspects of being a CIA officer. They also helped Johan get a better handle of his powers and Javier started to develop weapons and other tech for them. Both of them were sent on their first mission together. The mission ended with Johan having to kill the target. He did so and after that day he was really never the same. For him missions became more about killing than anything. As time went on, Johan racked up more and more kills. He started to go against orders and everything. This eventually led to Johan and Javier getting into a fight. Both of them were even in fighting ability so it ended in a draw because other operatives restrained Johan. Johan ended up getting burned and that really sent him off the deep end. He started babbling on how he would not stay shut unless they paid him to. The CIA with their hands tied agreed. Johan ended up stealing his ops suit and got away. Now he just travels around as an assassin for hire, a mercenary, or a crime lord.
Powers
He can create a near perfect duplicate of himself, and all items on his person, meaning weapons, clothing etc. He does this through absorbing kinetic energy, meaning when he snaps his fingers, claps, stomps on the ground, etc. This ability does not protect him from the pain or injuries of any impact, it only powers his ability. He is able to control through will, whether he wants to produce clones or not so that he does not produce a clone by mistake. The clone is a tangible person and has the same personality and thought process as the original. The original Duplex cannot hive mind or communicate telepathically with the other clone, so this makes the clone in a way an independent person. Only the original is able to produce the duplicate and absorb the duplicate back into himself through touch, and would gain the knowledge, skills, etc that the duplicate may have learned. When the clone is killed, it dissolves away enabling Duplex to create another. He is limited to only creating 1 other duplicate at once near perfectly.
Along with being a superb fighter, Johan is also a highly skilled marksman with ranged weapons and throwing knives. He became highly proficient in hand to hand, armed to unarmed, and armed to armed combat. He of course has his own fighting style that is highly unorthodox and unpredictable, which makes him such a deadly foe.
Power Grid
INT: 4
STR: 2
SPD: 2
END: 2
EP: 6
FS: 6
(Clone's Grid)
INT: 4
STR: 2
SPD: 2
END: 1
EP: 0
FS: 6
Power Grid colours
Pink/violet and grey
Character Image/Description
- Spoiler:
The nice nighttime breeze rolled by off of the coast of Malibu, Cali. The wind would go through Duplex's hair as he was standing on top of the roof of one of them large houses that were just overlooking the beach and the ocean. He would nonchalantly walk down the slanted part of the roof. He reached the edge of the roof and right below him on the porch of the second floor there was a man standing there. The man was wearing a suit, a pretty expensive one too. He also held a fully auto and he was wearing an earpiece. This man was a body guard of course, but for who? It was really no one important, just a pretty powerful crime lord is all. Duplex would drop down silently behind the bodyguard that was looking out at the ocean. Duplex went ahead and snapped the man's neck, taking him out. Duplex would then turn around and open the double doors that were in front of him, leading him into the bedroom of this crime lord. No one else was in the room except for them two. Duplex would walk up to the doors that led into this man's room and locked them both. Duplex would walk over to his bedside and pull out one of his swords and slowly run it down the man's face as it cut his cheek. This man jumped up to look at who it was.
"Who the hell are you!?"
"Heh.. no one special really."
"Wha-What do you want!?"
"Oh it's not about what I want, no. It's your brother actually. He says... hold on"
Duplex would rummage through his multiple pockets. The man who was still in bed was about to call out for help, but Duplex would hit him right in the throat with the hilt of his sword, making him incapable of speaking for the time being. Finally Duplex would pull out a pretty wrinkled folded up piece of paper. He would open it up and read off it.
"Quote. Hey bro. Thanks for dying and leaving the business to me. See you in hell. End quote."
Those would be the last words heard by this crime lord as Duplex would go and slash right through his neck. Duplex would then proceed over to the locked doors and would unlock them. He would open the door and stab the two guards that were in front of him. Duplex's plan was to use the front door to make his "escape". Throughout the house, all that was heard were gunshots and people's bodies hitting the floor. The front door would then open, with Duplex walking out through the front door and hopping into one of the nice cars that was out in front of the house. He hot wired it and then made his way out of the place.
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Re: Duplex
The absorbing energy seems a little rigged, fighting a physical character such as Pain for example you could in theory just keep your absorbing mode on and Pains hit would do nothing to you, I think you need to add a limit to how much you can absorb, My suggestion is either a straight limit, maybe a couple hits before you cant abosrb anymore, or add an overload system, id allow this to let you absorb a few more hits than just the straight limit, but if it absorbs too much it "overloads" basically releasing the energy upon yourself and damaging you, but thats just my 2 cents, fix this, then approved
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Thanks, I think I fixed it now.
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I still think its a little much, 2 shots from a level 7 punch is a little much, maybe 1, because not every character has 7 strength and itd be far too difficult for a character with lower strength to harm you, also you wouldn't be able to switch back and forth from form to form in a snap, it should take a few seconds
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True true... it's time for an overhaul I think. I'm gonna need my other guy unapproved please because I'm gonna have to fix his history along with a lot on this char.
Edit: I need someone to gauge how much EP exactly I will need for duplication. The power is:
He can create perfect duplicates of himself, and all items on his person, meaning weapons, clothing etc. He does this through absorbing kinetic energy, meaning when he snaps his fingers, claps, stomps on the ground, etc. This ability does not protect him from the pain or injuries of any impact, it only powers his ability. He is able to control through will, whether he wants to produce clones or not so that he does not produce a clone by mistake. Each clone is a tangible person and has the same personality and thought process as the original. The original Multiplex cannot hive mind or communicate telepathically with the other clones, so this makes each clone in a way an independent person. Only the original is able to produce duplicates and absorb the duplicates back into himself through touch, and would gain the knowledge, skills, etc that the duplicate may have learned. He is limited to only creating 5 other duplicates at once perfectly. If he tries to produce anymore, it would end up producing a flawed duplicate that would be useless in any situation.
I think I covered most of it in that^^^ This would be my new power to replace the previous one. Is there anything wrong with this and I need help gauging how much EP this will take if it is okay.
Edit: I need someone to gauge how much EP exactly I will need for duplication. The power is:
He can create perfect duplicates of himself, and all items on his person, meaning weapons, clothing etc. He does this through absorbing kinetic energy, meaning when he snaps his fingers, claps, stomps on the ground, etc. This ability does not protect him from the pain or injuries of any impact, it only powers his ability. He is able to control through will, whether he wants to produce clones or not so that he does not produce a clone by mistake. Each clone is a tangible person and has the same personality and thought process as the original. The original Multiplex cannot hive mind or communicate telepathically with the other clones, so this makes each clone in a way an independent person. Only the original is able to produce duplicates and absorb the duplicates back into himself through touch, and would gain the knowledge, skills, etc that the duplicate may have learned. He is limited to only creating 5 other duplicates at once perfectly. If he tries to produce anymore, it would end up producing a flawed duplicate that would be useless in any situation.
I think I covered most of it in that^^^ This would be my new power to replace the previous one. Is there anything wrong with this and I need help gauging how much EP this will take if it is okay.
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Well its a perfect copy, meaning it would be a copy of all your stats, which is also a little rigged, at most would be 1 copy but its durability would have to be low, like a 2, or something that makes it balanced, id need to see your characters powergrid first, just put up the points you think you want first, the EP power you want would be 6 points
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So then it is the same as before. I mean my guy generally isn't super strong, durable, or fast especially since everyone here is a super.
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You have one more point to spend, and if your stats are like that then you can have a perfect clone, down to the t
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Okay so if I put it on FS would it be alright? And then I limit it to only 1 clone right?
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Yes, but I think you may have to make a slighter adjustment, your fighting skill would make you a hard opponent, but if your clone had the same fighting skill it would become just a tad too difficult, I think you should lower his clones endurance to 1
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That's cool with me.
So I am gonna finish this guy and I have to make a slight History adjustment in my other character, Rush.
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So I am gonna finish this guy and I have to make a slight History adjustment in my other character, Rush.
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You dont need a two minute cooldown, your clone is weak enough not to need it, if you want you can change that, afterwards, approved
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Okay I fixed it. Thank you
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