Replacing Tempest

Real Name: Alicia Darkholme
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Idol
Title: The Undeniable Idol
Alignment: Heroine
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Race: Caucasian
Hair: Natural Brunette, Bleached Blonde
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 127lbs

Costume Description/Image: https://i.servimg.com/u/f20/16/40/76/58/black_10.jpg

Personality: The far from humbled singer/song writer is every bit as full of herself as can be. But behind the arrogance and stubborn outter shell is the heart of a hero. She is caring and when under pressure of younger or generally more innocent influence, she can be as warm as a big sister. She also has a tortured mind in a way, suffering from a forced split personality as a young girl. She's only ever opened up to under extreme pressure, revealing a more sensative side of herself.

History: The established alt. rock genre singer/song writer very recently obtained her abilities. On vacation in the islands, she'd gone for a swim alone when a strom forced her to wait out on a small island until she could safely get back to mainland. But in wandering, she fell into a hidden cavern, filled with glowing white crystals. The instant she touched one, a strange white energy pulsated from every crystal in the cavern. Unknown to her, this stange energy was radiation stored in them as a result of nuclear testing in that site. The radiation triggered a strange reaction, resulting in her powers. Since then she has learned many applications for her abilities.

Powers: Alicia is capable of incredible Crystallokinesis, allowing her to general crystals from moisture in the air, minerals in the earth and trees, and even her own skin. She can shoot crystal darts and generate any shape of crystal she esires such as pillars from the earth, cages around targets, even from her skins she can create various weapons such as shields, swords, spears, etc. Her crystals appear to be entirely indestructible as even Gladius could not break them, not could Adaptroid. However, Tempest tore through the crystals like tissue paper. By this time, however, Tempest was a hero and was only demonstrating weaknesses for Alicia well-being. Alicia has limited telekinetic control of the crystals she generates, allowing them to float in the air for short periods of time. She tends to use this to simulate flight or create steps and elevator-like constructs. The uppermost limits of her powers aren't known but it's believed that she hasn't even gotten a fraction complete yet. She also has super-dense skin making her fairly strong and highly durable.


Powergrid:



Her history is like that because she is a Comicbook Character I made. If I were to post Spider-Man's history, it'd legit be "An average boy gets bitten by a radioactives spider, in turn giving him the abilities of a human sized Spider. When his uncle is killed, he decides to use said power for the greater good." Case and point all you need to know is how she got her powers.

You have to write your power in your own words, you can't just give a link. That leaves way to many questions, and is just lazy.

Also it doesn't look like you spent much time on this app at all. Your history is only a couple of sentences and only explains how you got your power. But if you content on keeping it that way, once you've actually written your powers I'll review the app.

By the way, you labeled what colors you want for your grid, but you forgot to actually put your stats.

I didn't forget it didn't get copied over if you must know I'll do it in a second..

Edited. Better?

Alright, looks better. I'm cool with the power, but you should know that you don't need telekinesis to hold your crystal objects in the air. That comes with Crystallokinesis.

However about your crystal armor, I think that when you apply it, it should be similar to a transformation. Let's say this is your standard powergrid.

INT: 2
SPD: 3
STR: 1
DUR: 3
EP: 5
FS: 3

Then when you coat yourself in cystals/transform, your powergrid could look like this.

INT: 2
SPD: 3
STR: 3
DUR: 6
EP: 5
FS: 3

I think that this would be the best way to do it, and it would make it much easier to keep track of your powergrids. It would make your character weaker then everyone else unless your in the crystal armor, but if you were gonna do that anyway, this is how I'd suggest going about it.

I just decided to make her skin super-dense like a diamond because I really don't feel like making hr have to change to be of any use at all.

I wouldn't say she's useless outside of her armor at all. There are plenty of people who have high EP, but really low physical stats. But if you want to do it that way, let me know once you've made the edits.

I already made the edit. It's described last in her powers.

Alright in that case, once fix your powergrid I'll approve you.

If you still wanted my suggestion on what level to put your EP, I'd say 5. This way your powergrid could look like this, without going over 22 points, and because 5 EP is a good level so that your crystals would be very durable and wouldn't break as easily under pressure.

INT: 2
SPD: 3
STR: 3
DUR: 6
EP: 5
FS: 3

Okay sure then. I'll do that.

Much better. You could add some more character detail to your history, but it's acceptable. Approved and moved.

Powergrid added.

Here's the link in case ya need it, https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img823/212/aliciar.png