jeannie power ups

So we got quite a couple of things up here that make this hard to work with.
We can start off with the most simple issue, this needs to be properly capitalized, punctuated, spaced, and the spelling needs to be checked. A few missing things are not an issue, but each one has a lot of issues in this manner alone.
Advancements are supposed to be given a cost by staff, not by the person sending it in.
Finally, all of the abilities below lack an explanation of how they work, they need a reason to exist as advancements are supposed to be a sense of progression, but nothing is showing how this would take place or how they operate. More detail will be required.

ok well, not really sure about them actually being a sense of progression. pretty much there are some ideas for abilities I thought would be good for her.

I just thought of them after had already been approved and thought I'd have to do an advancement thing. but really should be more editing them in cause their stuff she should have had I forgot to add the first time then an actually level-up deal.

huh, not really sure how to be more explanation of how they work with talks to animals. she can understand animals is pretty much how it works.

maybe it's like she really loves animals and spends a lot of time with them so she gets a better understanding of them. guess it works however dnd rangers can.

the luck meant to be like domino from Deadpool. so not sure how to really explain how it works just the result of how it does. probability manipulation I guess or lots of good karma.

for the sixth sense, it's kinda hard to be descriptive that's a pretty vague mystery thing. could be a product of how her normal sense are enhanced so they combine to make her more aware of things.

the cute one might be more a personality trait than a power. the easiest way to describe it would be in an RPG she'd have max chrisma. Jennie's just really nice and friendly so it makes her easy to get along with people.

think the price bits an accident cause I could swear I saw some wear that it worked that way. so that's an easy fix.

I'll work on it and try and fix it.