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Post by Horo Fir March 13th 2015, 7:06 pm


The Light of Darkness
CHARACTER TITLE OR QUOTE


Basic Biography



Real Name:Horo Fir
Renegade
Title: Horo Fir, The Iren of The Accursed
Alignment: Evil Neutral
Age:1291 years old, but looks 17
Gender:Appears to be male
Race:Iren
Hair:White
Eyes:Red
Height:6 foot 1
Weight:186 lbs
Blood type:None

 
The Looks
   

Horo Fir 25hpjyr


 
The Legacy
   


Personality:
Horo is full of passion and energy, complimented by a rational, if sometimes distracted, mind. Inspiring, convincing and colorful, He are natural group leaders, pulling everyone along the path less traveled, bringing life and excitement everywhere He go. Putting these qualities to a constructive and rewarding end is Horo's true challenge.



History:
Horo Fir was last child of Emodome, the father of Iri. He was fated to exterminate his race by the Iren of Foresight, Erina. So, Onkof, the second in command order the death of him as soon as he was born. Emodome hid his son from his children. He demanded Horo's head, so he sent the strongest, the Iren of Slavery/Enthrallment, Raahmuut to kill him.

Raahmuut found him but, he only a baby so he couldn't bring himself to do it. The Iren took the child and hid him in his mansion. But, Onkof couldn't be decided that easily and planned to murder Raahmuut and the child. This forced Raahmuut to moved his rook, in order to pause his check. He moved Horo into his concentration camp, Rahmutian.

War spread rampaged on the planet, Iren Empire was falling, but they managed over Rahmutian at all time. Raahmuut began to plot Horo escape, so he need Onkof to slip up. Finally, doing a full assault on Verma, Onkof's base region. Onkof retreated to Rahmutian in order to set a retaliation attack. There Onkof saw Horo and accidental revealed life scaring information.

Lost and confused Horo, wanted to make sure that Raahmuut was on his side. So, he confronted Raahmuut, and Raahmuut confessed to plotting his murder in order for him to escape. Horo escaped later that night, and vowed to get vengence. He ran towards the capital, and on trip, he realized that his species was a disease on the planet. He had to eliminate them.

So he began his campaign and the race disappeared, all the except The Nine. He couldn't defeat them and had to ran to Earth. He will return one dy to defeat them, or they will find them.



 
The Powers and Weaknesses
   

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1:Oblivion
Complete mastery over Portals and Pocket dimensions. Mastery of the area between realms. Portals are open only in the line sight. He can't open a portal in New York and to Paris. He can pulling things into oblivion and use them later, like kirby. He can even go inside oblivion nd is the only to heal himself.


Power 2:Magic
Much like Raven, his magic is in his people.  He can heal and other generic magic moves, but they can't be elemental.

Spell list:
Heal
Alter- Turn object from one thing to another, must the physics laws of that dimensio
Decay- Kill objects by pushing the object (This obivious can't work on players) though oblivion without protection
Shout- Skyrim shouts
   Force
   Dismay
   Throw voice


Weakness(es)

Weakness 1:The Conflux, a relic from the Planet of Nevano, this artifact can maternalize his heart. If he is hit with the weapon, he will be threw in Oblivion or the Twelve Seals recover.

Weakness 2:The Eyes of Nine. 9 different gems that will render him useless, found in the debris of fallen kings, special meteors

Weakness 3: The Word of the Nine, magic that seriously wound him: Freeze

Weakness 4: Midday: The sun rays at this time can harm him

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s):N/A

Items/Minions
The Influx, all of Horo's weakness are the swords and all of Horo's strengthes are the swords.

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Agility 3
Endurance 2
Reaction 4
Strength 1


Last edited by Horo Fir on March 14th 2015, 1:05 am; edited 6 times in total
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Post by Alpha March 13th 2015, 8:47 pm

First: You'll need a little more in your personality and history. The personality is too short, and the history is very confusing.

Second: You need to describe Oblivion beyond the name of the power, as that doesn't give too much information. What does it do, and how is it used?

As for the magic, what sort of spells does he know? Writing magic doesn't quite cut it either as far as powers go.

Thirdly: The weaknesses are not adequate. Getting stabbed in the heart isn't exactly a potent weakness, and women aren't as well. Are they unable to harm women, or what? You'll need to expand on the second, and if the powers prove too powerful you'll need more weaknesses as well.

Last: For the sword of shard, it will need a weakness as well, and a description of what it does.

Enact these changes and I will look over the app again.

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Post by Horo Fir March 13th 2015, 11:08 pm

Fin, my lord
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Post by Asmodeus March 13th 2015, 11:58 pm

Ok so I'm the one taking over form here I guess. So let's begin.

First, Oblivion is portal powers. Portal powers are heavily restricted for good reasons. Please explain EXACTLY everything this person can do with portals and we will re-evaluate it from there.

Second...
Horo Fir wrote: so he can't fire direct but, he can control the space in between them.
That may be me misreading it, but after three times of looking at it all I see is special manipulation...which is a banned power. If I'm wrong just let me know and we'll talk about it.

Third of all under your magic list you stated
Horo Fir wrote:Spell list:
Heal
Alter- Turn object from one thing to another, must the physics laws of that dimension
Oblivion time shift- pause time for 25 seconds, can only use at near death situation.
Decay- Kill objects by pushing the object though oblivion without protection
Enchant- Writing the rules for an area.
Shout- Skyrim shouts

There's a lot that needs tweaked or elaborated on. First Time shift is a no go. At all. Time manipulation is a banned power.

Decay is a 1 hit K.O and you could easily define a person as an object. It needs to specify that it doesn't mean PC's and it needs permission for other players items.

Enchant says "writing the rules for an area". That power is very, very vague. Please elaborate, because at the moment it looks like "reality manipulation". Which is also, obviously banned.

Shout says "Skyrim Shouts". This is a cool power, I got someone with it. You need to list EVERYTHING this person can preform with these shouts. Because fo the nature of shouts each shout is in fact a power and needs it own weakness (unless you do what I recommend and make shouting a secondary spell list)


Moving onto weaknesses, the weaknesses are unfair to say the least, you also do not have enough weaknesses to cover what powers you have. Each spell list requires at least 2 weaknesses, and all regular powers require their own weakness.

Your weaknesses are tailored to these 9 gems and this weapon that absolutely no one could know about without the blatant God-Mod and since the character has such an array of powers they need to have substantial weaknesses that gives other people a fighting chance. This isn't DC comics and not all of our villains have your kryptonite (one of these 9 gems) like we can get it form a convenience store.

All and all I can tell you I LOVE the concept of this character and he's a cool concept, but in order for him to exist here in SHRPG he needs a little more balance. I'd love to work with you to make this character viable in our system and if you have any questions or want any ideas I'm available at almost anytime.

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Post by Horo Fir March 14th 2015, 12:45 am

Fixed, please bare in mind that I can't add anymore weakness, 12 weakness is just a littlte unfair. I beg not make Horo a wussy which everything kills him
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