Corgi Khaos

by **The-Corgi** June 24th 2014, 11:36 am

Corgi Khaos
woff woff. and goodnight

Basic Biography

Real Name: Christy Hutson
Renegade Name: Corgi Khaos
Title:The Queen of Corgi
Alignment:Chaotic Neutral
Age: 17
Gender:Female
Race: dog specific corgi Pembroke
Hair: blond
Eyes:brown
Height:11,80 in
Weight: 26,44 pund
Blood type:AB+

The Looks

her hero costume
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The Legacy

Personality:

Christy is a bit shy corgi special around new people and dogs and special bigger dogs that wants to play rough around her.
But deep in her she fill a anger to many people. And she will hurt everyone who try to get to her goal.
And animal friend that gets all her love and make her happy. But even with a hole zoo around her she still want to go her own way and want no one to take control over her and decide for her what to do.

History:

Christy grow up in the better part of UK with a rich dad what was the owner of a great pet shop that was famous not only in UK but in all Europa. Her mother was working fulltime as a vet with her private clinic.
Christy hat always been a good helper to her mother and dad and help them with what ever they wanted to do. But social her life was not good. Her school was a private school for the upper class kids, but like anyone ells she did not like to read gossip or wear fanzy cloth and talk about who is the hottest newest boy. She more like to read comic, draw or read about dogs. If not that she more like to be outside looking at the sky day dreaming. But because of that she did get bullied by the other girls. from getting pushed around, getting humiliated, and the worst time she got her comics ripped apart. One day it was to much for her, after one of the girls destroy her favorite comic with X-men and her favorite one shadowcat . She end up fighting with her and both girls got so violent that Christy end up in the hospital and after that because of Christy young age she could not go to prison so she was send to 1 year community service. Lucky for her that her dad did have a little bit power and made a deal that she could work as a dog walker.

After that Christy become more and more happy than ever before. She could spend all day walking around with all the dogs from London. She even begin to get a little shop going making animal costumes most for fun she did not believe that dogs should wear cloth but sometimes it was okay.
But one day change her life forever...
Christy got a special job of dog sitting an older woman dogs that was going to a opera weekend and Christy say yes to take care of her corgi. She hat a lovely weekend and she did a great job. She decided to take a extra long walk with the corgi the evening. They took a long walk up to a park that was a bit outside the city. The sky was clear and the moon was shining high on the sky.
The corgi looked up at the sky and begin to bark. * What is it? Is it a bird you saw?* not more did she say before a huge light beam on her and the corgi. she begin to fill more dizzy and begin to fall a sleep. As she fall asleep she got beamed up in the spaceship.

Christy waked up into the house of the old house the same that the old woman lived in. But something was different. She walked over to a mirror and saw she was somehow mutated into a corgi. She could stile speak but find out soon she was no longer able to walk on tow legs she was forever like this. A girl trapped in a corgis body.

she was fast to tell her best friend that promise to help her and with some help from her and her mother and father she got set up in her own place. She begin to think about what to do with her new powers. When she begin to think of all the evil people that did horrible things done to animal. Animals at the zoo. Kids that don't know how to treat a dog.

The Powers

Power 1:
Be able to communicate with animals and humans

Power 2:
Power bite: Her teeth are strong, and can bite through human flesh and bone.

Power 3:
Corgi FU: She hat after her transformation worked hard on learning the art of kung fu and try to become better. But she can have problem with doing it on 2 legs. so she worked on her own way to do it as she called corgi fu

Power 4:
the dog nose so she can smell thing better and hear thing better

Grid
INT: 4
STR: 5
SPD: 7
DUR: 6
ABI: 2
FS: 5
FLI: 0
$$$: 2

by **Chellizard** June 24th 2014, 2:42 pm

Just a few lil things. Go through and fix any spelling errors or word mistakes; example:

The-Corgi wrote: Her teat are strong and can bit threw a human arm

Should be:

Her teeth are strong, and can bite through human flesh and bone.

But that's an example.

Now, on to the rest of your app.

I need you to convert the height and weight to feet/inches and pounds (lbs.)

I also need you to take a closer look at your grid...

You have:

INT: 6
STR: 5
SPD: 7
DUR: 0
ABI: 0
FS: 5
FLI: 5
$$$: 2

For starters, having zero durability means your character could get hit by a breeze and likely bruise. Durability is how tough skinned or strong boned she is.

Which means, the teeth being strong power would not work.

Flight only goes up to a maximum of 2 points.

This means you've wasted 3 points in that stat for nothing.

Now, I must mention your characters powers.

You have 2 powers that need ABI to work. The communicate with animals, and being able to smell better than humans.

That means you need 1 Ability point per power.

So, I'm going to show you want your grid should look like, and that means I'll be adjusting your point allocations as well.

INT: 4
STR: 5
SPD: 6
DUR: 6
ABI: 2
FS: 5
FLI: 2
$$$: 1

This balanced grid gives your character more than average intelligence, great strength, speed, and durability. You have 2 allocated points to ability. 1 is for heightened sense of smell, and the second is for communicating with animals. You have 5 FS, meaning you're a master of a certain fighting style. You have 2 FLI which means you can fly. And I left your wealth at base wealth because spending an additional point in wealth from your starter pool would mean sacrificing from your actual grid.

I hope this helped.