Shane Winters/ Pyro

Real Name:Shane Winters
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name:Pyro
Title:Flame Boy
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Age:22
Gender:Male
Race:Caucasian
Hair:Red
Eyes:Dark Blue
Height:5' 8"
Weight:150 lbs.
Blood Type:O Negative
General Appearance:His red hair is short and spiky, his skin is mildly tan, he is of medium muscle mass, he is physically fit, and he has a head in the shape of an upside down oval with a pointy chin. His costume is very unique and shows people that he has the power of fire. He as an eye mask with flame designs on it, his latex suit is red with an orange flame symbol on the chest, he wears white gloves with a flame design all around the bottom part of it, he wears white boots with a flame design all around the top of it, and he has a cape make of fire that he creates himself with his fire powers when he is in superhero mode.

Personality:He is very energetic and does not like to sit still for too long. He is kind, loyal, sometimes stubborn, and he is very hot tempered. You do not want to make him angry because you'll regret it very much.

History:He was born in Beverly Hills, California to a slightly rich couple named Fred and Cheryl Winters. Fred was a businessman and entrepreneur, and Cheryl is the manager of the local zoo. When there is trouble brewing in the world, Fred is known as Flamio and Cheryl is known as Flamella. Together they are known as The Flame Duo. Because of this, it is obvious that he got his powers from his parents. They are very good heroes to balance running a business and saving the world. It's amazing that they have time for both because running a business is a demanding job, and saving the world is not any less busy, especially with crime being on an all time high these days. What's even more amazing is that they were able to find plenty of time to spend with there son. Shane never felt neglected, and he was usually pretty happy. When he was little, he admired his parents very much and couldn't wait for the day when he could save the world too. As he got older, he increasingly desired to go out into the world, and he was eager to be a superhero as well. When he was eighteen, he decided that he was old enough to start saving the world, so he talked to his parents about it. They agreed and suggested that he join them to make it the Flame Trio, but he decided that he wanted to save the world on his own. His parents sadly agreed, and sent him out into the world to start his own superhero journey. He then became Pyro the Flame Boy. Good luck Shane.

Powers

Power 1:Dragon Breath-This power allows him to breath fire like a dragon. The fire can cause second degree burns on the opponent, and will be permanent until treat. The burns will cause scarring if they are not treated in time. The pain from the burns will last for three posts.

Power 2:Fire Orb-This power allows him to create balls of fire in his hands that can be thrown at opponents. The flame is not strong enough to cause burns, but it will hurt or injure the opponent. This power can also be used for light in dark places.

Power 3:Spark-This power allows him to created a spark of fire by snapping his fingers. This can be used to ignite explosive material. It can also be used to light a fire when needed.

Power 4:Fire Jet-This power allows him to fly by emitting a stream of fire from his hands like he was using a jet pack. This can also be used to launch streams of fire at opponent like flamethrowers. This flames can cause second degree burns, and prolonged exposure can cause third degree burns. These burn can be permanent unless treated, and will cause scarring if not treated in time. The pain from these burns will last for three posts.

Power Grid

Intelligence:3
Occult:0
Strength:5
Speed:3
Durability:5
Ability:5
Fighting Skills:2
Magic:0
Spells:0
Fight:3
Wealth:4

First off, INT and OCC share the first three descriptions for the stats.

So, having 3 in INT and 3 in OCC is silly. Pick one stat, and either put 3 points in it, and distribute the other three among the rest of your grid, or put 6 in either INT or OCC.

Not 3 in each.


Your abilities need to be explained better.

And, to be honest, you ahve Fire Manipulation; and Flight from fire.

You need to put more points into your Ability field for your powers.

You also have 3 in your flight area. The maximum amount of points for Flight is 2; 2 is Full Flight.