Devastate

Real Name: David Scott
Super Villain Name: Devastate
Title: The Destroyer
Alignment: True Neutral
Age:29
Gender:Male
Race:Caucasian
Hair:Brown
Eyes:Green
Height:6'5
Weight:250 kg

Costume Description: He wears a balaclava and goggles to hide his identity. On his body he only wears a Kevlar vest, jeans and sneakers

Personality: Quiet and mysterious, most people would assume that David was just dumb muscle. They would be wrong. He is smarter than the average person, able to deduce things most people can't. He normally keeps to himself and only talks when talked to. However, he is under the apparent belief that he is incredibly unattractive to women and often avoids them. He enjoys reading Jane Austen and listens to jazz. Tends to avoid killing, unless it is absolutely necessary . Has a strange habit of getting into a friendly conservation with a worthy opponent.

History: David was born in London, England. His parent were regular humans who were caught in the crossfire of a raging battle when he was only 3. When he was taken to the orphanage the fact that he had powers was a shock. His first experience with his powers was when he saved someones life by stopping a car. Some speculate that his mother had been exposed to an experimental mutagen when she was pregnant. When he was 5, he was adopted by a superhero couple. He had a rather happy childhood, but after losing temper and injuring another kid his parents decided to teach him how to control his powers. When he was finally 18, he attempted to join various superhero groups. Unfortunately, he was rejected by every single one due to his astonishing brutality in a fight. His dreams crushed, he decided to become a mercenary. He fought in cities all over the world, and has years of experience in his pocket.

Powers and Abilities:
Super Strength: Stronger than the average human, he can lift things most people can't and hits harder than Mike Tyson.

Enhanced Durability: He can take a lot more punishment than the normal human. He can survive huge falls and direct gun shots.

Trained Boxer: He took boxing lessons since he was 12. Participated in super powered street fights for some quick money.

Power Grid: (You have 22 points to spend on your Power Grid unless you can fly, in which case you have 20. Each stat can start at 6, not 7. 7 must be earned.)
STR:6
SPD:1
END:6
INT:5
EP: 0
FS: 4

Power Grid colours: Black

Character Description: Is incredibly tall and muscular. Has a crew cut and a stubble. Has a scar starting from his lower jaw and ending at his left ear. Has a rather broad chin.

Roleplay Sample: David was surrounded by three heroes, he could instantly tell they were rookies. One charged at him, fists surging with electricity. One turned his arm into an ice sword and the other readied an energy blast. David managed to stop the charging hero with a quick jab to the jaw and followed it up with an uppercut which sent the hero flying.. He narrowly dodged an energy blast. The hero with the arm sword swung it clumsily at his distracted opponent. David felt a quick pain at his back and swung his fist in the direction of the attack and landed a solid hit. Another blast hurtled into his direction and he managed to block it with his arms. He charged at the hero and slammed him into the nearest wall. With the threats neutralized, David fled before reinforcements arrived.

I really need to get this approved

Your history, and your personality, are both on the shorter side. I'd like you to write more, and be more elaborate.

You also need to give us an RP example; show us what you can do with "Devastate."


Your Hero/Villain/Renegade are able to start with level 6 stats, btw.


Your character description is also way too short; I barely know what he looks like.

Your History also needs to include HOW he got his powers; and HOW he learned how to control his strength, etc.

(:

The reason why he has powers is supposed to be a mystery. I'll get to expanding his history and personality

It can be a mystery to others, and even himself, but you're the RPer; you can write his history, and explain within it he has no recollection of HOW he actually got his powers.

I have updated his history and personality.

Question. Do i get to use my character even if it isn't approved?

No, you cannot use your character if it is not approved; hence why you have to be approved to RP.

So, your history is still very short. It lacks all the information that I asked for.

Still denied.

This is my first biography. I may need some help.

Elaborate on his powers a bit more. Touch on how he reacted to having them. Etc.

Updated and ready for approval

His history is still very vague. It's too vague. I'd like for you to give me a couple of sentences in-depth explaining an experience with his powers that your character can recollect.

Updated

All right.. You're approved. Keep in mind though, whenever you'd like to add on more ot his history, or anything, just lemme know and I'll move your app for edits for his history/etc. (:

Have fun RPing.

Unnaprovified on the grounds or requestination.