Xaoc

Real Name: Unknown, goes by Xaoc (ZAY-oke)
Renegade Name: Still refered to as Xaoc
Title: The Tempest
Alignment: Renegade
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasion Human
Hair: Dark Brown with midnight blue stripe, nearly never seen.
Eyes: All orange.
Height: 6' 9
Weight: 182 lbs.

Costume Description/Image: Xaoc has two costumes, his business (street) and his battle costumes. His business costume is him in a pair of loose jeans and an unzipped brighter black hoodie, with the hood up, covering his eyes. The hoodie and jeans both have 2 pockets. His facial features include normal cheekbones, but a bit larger nose and smaller chin. His shoes are torn up sneakers, black with white soles, the basic 12 dollar shoes. His battle suit is much different: it is the image seen below.

Personality: Xaoc gets his personality from his name, Xaoc in Greek means "chaos". Xaoc, in business, is very calm and collected, able to easily keep his cool and seems like a real business man. But in battle, he is relentless and very deadly, he does not fear causing death in his enemies. Xaoc seems to love getting himself in trouble, that way he can increase his battle tactics and strength.

History: Xaoc is a human, but no normal human. He is a living science experiment, as he is a man and woman's DNA with some chemical mixture in the mix. This odd mixture was later revealed by the same scientist to be the source of his power, strange acidic liquid could be projected by Xaoc at will. Xaoc and his "father" both entered a dojo when Xaoc was 7, so they could learn battle tactics. He instantly noticed that he was different than others, he had a massive tail, protruding from his tailbone. For years, Xaoc and his creator trained in there, as they loved to bond over training. Years later, Xaoc was in his thirties, and he walked into his mentor's room, sword in hand, ready for training, to find it empty. Curious, he looked at the papers his master had on his desk, where he learned the truth of his creation, along with how his master planned to use Xaoc to destroy the dojo and rule the forces of Earth, to make them turn to chaos. His master walked into the room, and Xaoc attacked him without hesitation. He defeated his creator, and killed him. He dawned ancient Chinese Ninja Armor and began to traverse the world, doing things on his own terms.

Powers: Xaoc controls special liquids called by all as a form of acid, a strange fluid with the color of orange, it's viscosity is determined by Xaoc. The acid bears another ability, when it reacts with his skin, it can teleport him by melting Xaoc and reforming him nearby, VERY nearby, basically within battle range. His weakness is his anger. He also bears master martial arts and swordsman skills. He has a double-bladed sword, but it bears no powers. it is just a sword with 2 blades shaped like the wings of a bat.

Power Grid:
STR: 6
SPD: 2
END: 3
INT: 4
EP: 4
FS: 3

Power Grid colours: Orange

Character Image/Description:

Roleplay Sample: Xaoc looked down his blade at his former teacher. He lunged at his opponent and swung the massive blade at his enemy. "I am no pawn in your game of conquest! You will not live to see the end of this day!" His master rushed towards him and dashed past, drilling his elbow into Xaoc's upper spine. Xaoc, eakened, enraged himself, imbuing his sword with the acid. He began to spin his blade as a fan so fast, it generated a small tornado in the room. Xaoc dropped his acid into it, feeding it through the whirlwind, splattering randomly against his former mentor. He fell to the ground, attempting to raise back up. He looked at Xaoc and said "I created you, for that purpose! You were made as a tool of destruction, MY tool!"Xaoc, enraged, looked down at his master on the floor in disgust. "I will choose my own destiny old man. I have no more business with you in my life, I have obtained what I needed. I will not be what you want, old friend." Xaoc took the sword his master gave him, and plunged it into his chest, killing his master. "See you in the next life." Xaoc walked out of his dojo, to find a group of guards keeping him in. "Get out of my way if you enjoy breathing." The guard raised their swords. "Fine, we'll do it on my terms." Xaoc threw his sword around him, and the guards fell into two pieces each. He walked into the forest ahead, never to be heard from again.

Hehe, hello there. I'm Chelle, and I'll be helping you out today. ^_^

First off, you've placed your character in the NPC bin under renegades; why is this?

Secondly, you only have 2 fighting skills, so you cannot have mastered a form of martial arts yet. Below is listed the fighting skills from 0-7, as well as the levels.

FIGHTING SKILLS

0 - Comatose baby- You don't even have any fighting instinct

1 - Below Average - You have no training and little to no experience. You almost lack the ability to throw a decently placed punch and would stand no chance in a hand to hand fight with someone with even a little bit of training.

2 - Average - You haven’t taken any classes to become a experience fighter, and are limited to basic combat instinct and would still have a hard time competing with someone who is well trained.

3 - Trained - You've either been trained in martial arts for a short period of time, or have gained experience from being in many fights in your life time, and know how to fight fairly well compared to the average human.

4 - Master - You're a combat specialist who has been taught how to fight very well. You've achieved the highest rank possible in a single martial arts style, or have had minor training in several different forms of combat.

5 - Superhuman - Your skill is beyond human limits. You've mastered at least one or more fighting styles, or maybe you have learned a few styles to supplement the one you've mastered. Your muscles move faster than your mind, your reaction time is faster than thought and a normal person would be hard pressed to even land a punch on you.

6 - High Superhuman - You have mastered multiple forms of combat, and fighting a normal person would be like combat with a still target. Your reaction time is obviously superhuman, and even large groups of regular combatants pose little threat to you.

7 - Master of War - You are a being of pure combat. You have mastered a huge number of combat styles. Your reaction time is godly, and you read people like maps finding the flaws in their style like they were obvious.

As you can see, the one in bold, 2, is your level of Fighting Skills. You cannot have mastered any form of martial arts yet.

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As for your EP! You would need to split it. 2 for controlling the acid, and 2 for transportation with the acid.

As goes for the 2 EP in controlling it, I'll list the EP equivalents below:

Energy Projection.
0 – No Powers- Lacks any form of energy emission whatsoever. Like most average human beings. Doesn’t have any extraordinary power. Can’t heal, or project anything.

1 – Low Form of Energy- Has a small amount of energy which can manifest in slightly heightened senses, the ability to memorize movements, slight healing, even possibly altering parts of your body. Sometimes even seeing and speaking with the dead, or something equally as useful.

2 – Average Powers- A slightly higher emission. A faster healing factor, or shape shifting into animals or other people, but not both (Not yet at least). Sometimes a limited form of teleportation, or any other minor power.

3 – Low Superhuman emission- Where manipulation powers just begin to form. A limited amount of elemental manipulation, as well as higher healing rates. Perfect form of shapeshifting, or any other power equal in strength to ones labeled above.

4 – Average Superhuman emission- A powerful superhuman energy emission. Able to manipulate at higher rates. Produce stronger attacks. An even higher healing rate. Able to heal most minor injuries in thirty seconds, and major in minutes (Cannot start regenerating until damage has stopped, AKA if you’re being burnt or electrocuted you can’t begin the regeneration process until you are no longer being attacked.). Though regenerating a lost limb would still take almost a day and would be impossible in a battle. Also gives form to any other more complex abilities.

5 – Above Average Superhuman energy emission- Has either a very high healing rate. Able to heal what would be a fatal injury to a normal person in a matter of minutes (Note: You cannot heal a attack and get back up if it renders you unconscious. So if you have low durability and would be knocked out from the attack, even after you’ve healed you still have to wait to re-gain consciousness.), and minor in a matter of seconds. As well as producing fierce projection, and powerful manipulation that can cause fatal injuries to a normal human.

6 – High Superhuman- Has an astonishing healing rate. Able to heal most major wounds in about a minute to 30 seconds. Minor are gone almost as fast as they appeared. Manipulation powers become a major threat to even superhumanly durable foes, and can be fatal to those that aren’t. As well as projection powers. Extremely complex ablilities can take form at this level.

7 – Master Superhuman- A near limitless amount of energy emission. In healing they are virtually immortal to wounds. Able to heal major or minor wounds in seconds and fatal wounds in less then minutes, also stopping the aging process. Manipulation is to the point that you could destroy a building if you focused your energy. With charging and preparation, projection powers are almost incomprehensible in their power. Any power fueled by seven EP is dangerous, even to the most durable of foes, and can be deadly to low class superhumans. A normal human would stand no chance surviving a attack with this much power behind it.


Other than that, everything else looks good. Is that all you do RP wise? Just a couple of sentences?

Thank you, now, in order-
I posted it here because I hit the wrong button.
So, does that mean I lower some other skills to make room for his martial arts, or change his story?
So, I set my EP at ten, that is fine if so.
No, this is nothning. I thought "sample" referred to but a fes sentences.
Anything else that may need changed, just tell me and I'll get right on it!
EDIT: Whoa! EP ten! Not what I meant. I wanted 2.

All right, awesome. (: You should edit your original post, if you can, to tinker with your grid. Everything is honestly fine, but if you'd like more FS, I'd drop his strength by a point and place it into his FS so that he can have that martial arts.

And if you made him have 10 EP, you'd be taking points out of everywhere else on your grid to place in EP; you only get 22 points to play with, unless you have flight or pseudo-flight, then you have 21, and then 20.

(:

So, just go 'head and edit your post and we'll see where it goes from there. And RP sample is fine; if it's just that, a tiny sample. But if you are able to give us a larger, more exquisite taste of your skill, I'd like to see it.

Edited and hopefully acceptable. My character's Roleplay Sample, though still just a sample, has been extended, and I worked with the training. Give honest feedback and tell me how I did, and Xaoc is no NPC still, just hit the wrong button.

So, as long as you keep in mind your EP has to be split (2)Manipulation/(2)Transportation then yesh..

You are approved. ^_^

<3 I'll have to have one of our Admins move your app out of here, because I lack mod rights to this section of the forum. e.e;