Remnock the Holy Demon

Real Name: Remnock
Renegade/etc Name: Remnock/Remmy
Title: The Godly Demon
Alignment: Renegade
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair: Snow white with ash gray lines
Eyes: Slightly cyan blue
Height: 6' 2
Weight: 160

Costume Description/Image: Built body with scars all over. White hair with ash gray lines. Tight leather pants with a white t-shirt with wings in back. slight cyan eyes

Personality: Very outgoing and noisy, smart-ellic. Shy around pretty girls, but somewhat perverted. He always knows whats right to do in bad situations.

History: Born in a small country called Uphoria. He is considered a demon by people because when he was born, there was multiple sitings of Lucifer himself.He has a mark that looks like 6 6 6 spiraled in a circle. People were slaughtered and he was the only one to survive, about an hour after, the land was discovered and he was raised by Settlers. As he was raised when he got mad, people would die, on the day they died, there was a spotting of lucifer. Growing up he robbed alot of places learning that anyone that tried to hurt him would die eventually.He only aged to 23, mostly because of his curse. He saved up his money until he had enough for America. His mother was a gatherer, his father was more of the chief hunter.

They were somewhat a rich family of there people. Remnock was always treated with loyalty and had 3 brothers. They are currently all dead except for his Middle brother which is in an insane asylum. Most of the people on the island died but his brother was 21 when he left, Remnock is haunted by the possibility that his brother has the family "curse" also.

Powers: Super durable and strong with low intelligence. He can fly and run at a presumably shocking speed.


Power Grid:
STR: 5
SPD: 5
END: 5
INT: 2
FS: 3

Power Grid colours: Red and Black



Roleplay Sample: Remmy leaves uphoria feeling paranoid. He remembers vague flashbacks of himself when he was born. He sees a gory demon slaughtering his mother and father. He sees the demon slide its long sharp bloody nails down his back. He remembers the intense inscrutiating pain. He flies with a tan bulky suitcase in hand. He is starting a new beginning in America where he can have freedom, or so he thought. He arrived at the entering station. He files for a green card and is approved.

He takes his first sniff of America. He smells burgers and hotdogs, he can hear the sound of honking cars. He goes to a trashy dressed man and sits down." So can you tell me why you sit here?" Remmy says. No reply, he glances at the man notcing he is pale. He realizes he is dead, afraid of being caught Remmy flys off.

He goes and lands near a little town outside of New York. "I need reservations for 1 night please," he says over a payphone to a man at a local hotel. He only has about $2.5 million on him, he goes to a cheap slightly run-down hotel. "Name sir?," The hotel clerk says."Remnock Alexander Perseptonie Lucifer," Rem says gasping for air.

Alright, I've got some things to evaluate on this site

1. The character cannot be a demon, to my attention, we have disallowed demons completely in the site. Unless this has been changed, the point stands

2. Make the history and Personality much longer, one sentence isn't enough of a personality and a single paragraph not enough for a history, by my own personal opinion.

3. This is only just a tip, but you could go more in-depth with the powers, it could add to the app and better the approval process.

Alright it looks like this character good enough to be approved.