Valem Kanoka

Real Name: Valem Kanoka
Super Hero Name: Gravitor
Title: None
Alignment: Hero/Good
Age:19
Gender:Male
Race: Experimented Human
Hair: Long and Black
Eyes:Black
Height: 6' 1"
Weight:210 lbs.

Costume Description/Image: He looks just like this.


Personality: Valem or Gravitor, is a well calculating fighter. He focuses on plans and teamwork opposed to solo fighting...even just diversions upset him. Still he is an incredibly calm and calculating guy.

Weaknesses: In order for Valem to create larger and stronger fields he must concentrate harder so if by chance someone or something distracts him he will most likely lose control.

History: Valem was a sort of an unknowing lab rat from the young age of six until he was fifteen. He was tested on by scientist to withstand gravity. Another of the many experiments that was conducted on him was many so-called cures to sicknesses and diseases. After seven whole years he became somewhat immune to gravity and diseases and other sicknesses never even touched him. By the time he was fifteen he'd become somewhat aware of his powers, meaning that he'd begun to be able to heal at inconceivable rates, a major burn or if a hole was blown through him, he'd heal it within minutes. His ability to control gravity was much lesser at the time, but what he could do was create gravitational fields around him that could reach up to ten feet around him...even farther with time. Eventually he tried to make an escape for his life, he was encountered by several other experiments and easily subdued them with immense gravitational fields, and easily made it out alive.

Powers:
Gravitokinesis- Valem's ability to create gravitational fields around him to lessen or add more gravitational force. Instantly he can create a field up to twenty feet around him, but given more time he can gradually increase the field further outwards up 40 feet. His current maximum gravitational force that he can create is up to 20x normal gravity. The way his gravity fields is this, Valem creates a gravity field and anyone and anything inside becomes much slower and heavier. Much higher levels of this power can (if aloud) cause people to come to an almost standstill. Although Valem must concentrate incredibly hard for such levels to work(a weakness if I ever saw one).

Vitakinesis- Valem doesn't just heal his injuries he also mends them, meaning instead of just healing his body like normal healing abilities, he mends his injuries together, as his cells duplicate and create copies to rush over gaping wounds to stop the bleeding and pain.

Power Grid:


Character Image/Description:


Roleplay Sample:
Valem was watching the man carefully, as he gathered his inner prowess and readied them to launch at the man. With lightning fast movements the attacking man vanished in the blink of an eye. Letting it expand, the sphere of gravity he'd created began to move outwards as it stretched towards the man.

"What, are to scared Valem", the man, Helvor, asked as he flew in circles around Valem.

Valem smiled as his field neared closer to Helvor. It took a mere minute but as the sphere hit him Helvor dropped to his knees as the increased gravitational pull forced him to his knees.

"Do you yield", Valem inquired as Helvor struggled to get to his feet. Helvor merely shook his head in answer, and Valem raised his hands as he forced more force onto his adversary. "I repeat, do you yield", he questioned again.

This time Helvor nodded in answer, and instantly he fell to his knees as the force was pulled off him.

Added: This isn't my best work but I've been Role-playing for going on six years now and I hope that either I benefit from this site or I add something to it!

You need to better, greatly, increasingly elaborate on your powers. Pardon my slight harshness, but you cannot just control gravity like it's a 99 cent toy.. same goes for healing powers. I'd like an explanation as to how much gravity can be forced on a person, or persons, and the range they need to be in. I would also like to know to the extremity of the sickness, or wound, that the character can heal.

Another thing that sorta irks me is that fact that you're character.. is a human.. A human with powers that pop outta' nowhere.. so he'd need to be some form of experimented on or alien race.. even if he's half or something, that works too..

Improved!

The healing is fine as long as the correct amount of points are put into it. Quick heal, a few posts, 4 and then scale down from there for slower healing.

A quick thing about gravitational powers. Do you create like an invisible block that pulls people towards it? Or do you create fields that effect the speed of everything around you?

Being immune to gravity sounds like flight. And perfect flight, so the powergrid will need to go down two points.

Once how the gravity fields work it should be fine.

Just a site rule though, the gravity cannot effect time and black holes are not permitted. Both of these are god mode rules, because time travel is not good in rp and black holes cannot be dodged.

So.. is Valem able to move freely within his own field? If so.. please explain HOW he does so.

If not, then this power almost seems silly.. but it could be used for a chance to formulate a plan or something; that or confuse his opponent.

And when underneath of the gravitational state, is Valem able to instantly end the field? Or.. no?

Also, can Valem take away gravity? Give himself the ability to free-float?

As I said in the history, he can withstand the gravity because since he was young he was continuosly tested in increased gravity, making it so he is immune to it. And when he grows another level higher in gravity force amount he trains in it to allow him to move freely as if it were normal gravity.

Yes he can immediately end it, as if it were powered by a light switch, turn on he focuses...turn off, he then unfocuses or just instantely turns it off. It just takes time to build up the power and focus to build up the fields.

Yes he can take away the gravity and free float, but that can take a greater amount of focus considering how many items or people are within the field. He also can create a field or dome around him, with him at the epicenter and the gravity cannot touch him with in it if he is afloat.

That looks fine to me as you've only got 20 points which covers your floating...

So what colour would you like for your grid?

I am no mod so I bet this will be deleted and I will be yelled at but he needs to say how his ep is divide. He has two very powerful abilites. If he devotes 3 points to each power there is no way it heals the way he describes and create a gravity of 20x earth's gravity. The kind of power required to generate a gravametric field at 20x earth gravity is insane. Not only that but a 20 foot radius? That is just too insane.

o-o True ~Is still a new mod~ XD !

Hmmm... I guess if you split it 1 healing 5 gravity projection it may work? but you'd heal very slow.

And Hound you wouldn't be yelled out for helping us out! D=

With his current strength of 4 if he is moving in the gravity simply because he can over power it from daily training that means the ep for gravity is 3. If he increases his strength to 6 then he could walk around normally in 5 ep gravity. But that level of str is super power not training

you don't grow immune to gravity you grow strong enough to over come it

Hmmm okay so you're going to have to tone it down then so it fits or you could lower his INT by 2 and add it to strength - do you agree Hound? (:

He can leave it all alone and say 3 points for grvity and 3 for healing. Eith that he can greatly slow people of str 3 and hamper str 4 and put a light strain on 5 and 6

for healing he can heal from life threatening wounds in about 10minutwa give or take.

And that should be good.

There ya go ^^; Up to you what you do. :3

I think that what he just suggested would work thanks for the suggestion!!