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Ren Starbomb (WIP)
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Re: Ren Starbomb (WIP)
Arrow said that's how it should be split so that's how it should be split. The 1 EP remaining is for the transformation itself and the other points are divided into strength and durability. Think of it like a werewolf turning from human to...werewolf... and the fact that a werewolf suddenly bulks up, they're stronger, faster, more durable etc. (: It's like a different form.
And Ren, you should get rid of the shooting metal and such and keep with the fact you can turn your arms into chainsaws and such.
And Ren, you should get rid of the shooting metal and such and keep with the fact you can turn your arms into chainsaws and such.
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But he still keeps the morphing ability in that form, which he states is any metal, not just his hands or arms, he also can pull out a sword from his spine and absorb and shoot metal, I think thats a little much for just a single EP point, if it was just shifting his hands then thatd be alright
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If you had just read my previous post dear you would know I just told him to get rid of that. ^^;
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I know, buts that assuming he does get rid of it, he also has the option of just increasing his EP by sacrificing elswehere, I was just saying in case he wanted to keep the ability
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Well he'll have to do it if he wants to be approved.
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I'm sorry, I completely over looked that morphing still requires a point of EP to switch between forms. But Ren edited the app days after my post, and I never even saw all those others powers. I will try and explain how you would have to split your EP now.
"Powers: body parts can turn into sharp metal."
Morphing, 1 EP.
"Powers: Can transform into anything metal."
I assume this is your ability to turn into metal. So, transforming your body parts requires 1 EP simply to switch between transformations, and then however much more EP you want to out into it. This is the power that would allow you to boost your strength and endurance, and is your only offensive power, so I suggest putting all your left over points into it (4).
"Powers: Can shapeshift."
I don't understand the purpose of this power. This power is okay, but since you can already turn your body into metal, why would you want or need to shapeshift? It seems like the only use that would come out of that would be you losing EP, because shapeshifting on it's own is 2 EP. That would leave your transformation with literally only 2 points, which wouldn't even be very effective. Not to mention you still have other powers on top of this.
"Can absorb metal and shoot it out."
This would only be a further waste of EP, because with the strength you'll achieve from becoming metal, you could just as easily throw metal as you could shoot it. And absorbing it, well I think that covering your entire body in metal is the best absorbing your gonna get, so you shouldn't even put that.
I highly suggest dropping those two, and only keeping your transformation and morphing. That would give you 4 additional points to spread between your grid, and would be the best use of your EP, since it is your only offensive ability.
This would be how your EP would be split
6 EP:
Morphing 1.
Transforming 5. (Remember that you need 1 EP to switch back, so only give yourself 4 bonus points.)
"Powers: body parts can turn into sharp metal."
Morphing, 1 EP.
"Powers: Can transform into anything metal."
I assume this is your ability to turn into metal. So, transforming your body parts requires 1 EP simply to switch between transformations, and then however much more EP you want to out into it. This is the power that would allow you to boost your strength and endurance, and is your only offensive power, so I suggest putting all your left over points into it (4).
"Powers: Can shapeshift."
I don't understand the purpose of this power. This power is okay, but since you can already turn your body into metal, why would you want or need to shapeshift? It seems like the only use that would come out of that would be you losing EP, because shapeshifting on it's own is 2 EP. That would leave your transformation with literally only 2 points, which wouldn't even be very effective. Not to mention you still have other powers on top of this.
"Can absorb metal and shoot it out."
This would only be a further waste of EP, because with the strength you'll achieve from becoming metal, you could just as easily throw metal as you could shoot it. And absorbing it, well I think that covering your entire body in metal is the best absorbing your gonna get, so you shouldn't even put that.
I highly suggest dropping those two, and only keeping your transformation and morphing. That would give you 4 additional points to spread between your grid, and would be the best use of your EP, since it is your only offensive ability.
This would be how your EP would be split
6 EP:
Morphing 1.
Transforming 5. (Remember that you need 1 EP to switch back, so only give yourself 4 bonus points.)
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Also, no one on this site is Kimimaro, nor do I even see how that would be possible. Unless you can explain how you still have a spine, or how you can stand the horrific pain of ripping your own spine out, just drop it.
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I pull my sword out my dick then xD, not really but not ripping my spine out
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Alright then, looks fine now. As soon as I make your powergrid you're ready to be approved. What colors would you like?
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Grids added, approved and moved.
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I am unapproving Ren because his app states that he was allowed to have the ability to ‘morph’ which I take is what lets him make himself get more ‘pointy’ and that much is fine but he also goes about turning himself into weapons and things of the like. The ability to transform yourself into any weapon you choose is a different power completely or a morphing that would take a higher level of EP to perform than one. Either Ren needs to increase his standard level of EP or he needs to stop making himself into anything he chooses.
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