Doctor, Connor Hellsdoom

Anything else needs fixing?

Dis shit be ight I guess.

Approvin' and movin' yo ass.

How did this get Approved? He has 24 Points. Plus there are things Sergiy didn't clarify in his character such as that his Blood has every toxic chemical in it, and he's Immune to Toxic chemicals.

I made an awful mistake in my haste. Forgive me.

Flagged for review; moving out of the approved.

Editted, can you change my grid to 6Ep,6 int, 1 speed, 6 fighting skill.,2 dur,1 stre

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And I find this part of the Character (A new addition) very questionable:

Sergiy wrote:
Powers:

Holds, Every Known Chemical in his blood steam. And Is immune, to Toxic. And the ones he produces.

Having every known Chemical in your blood stream will cause internal chemical mixes and cause your character to explode spontaneously. IDK if that's possible.

Sul-Fury wrote:Here:



And I find this part of the Character (A new addition) very questionable:

Sergiy wrote:
Powers:

Holds, Every Known Chemical in his blood steam. And Is immune, to Toxic. And the ones he produces.

Having every known Chemical in your blood stream will cause internal chemical mixes and cause your character to explode spontaneously. IDK if that's possible.

Should n';t An Alien be able to do that?

The way your grid is, it is very weak against physically strong heroes, or villains.. Having 1 speed makes you as slow as a turtle, and 1 strength means ya can't even lift your own body weight, and you also don't have have super high durability, so a lot of characters could easily swoop in and take you out no problem. Fighting Skills is good, but if you only have 1 speed it only helps so much. I'd suggest making your PG a bit more like this,

INT: 5
STR: 2
SPE: 3
END: 2
EP: 6
FS: 4

Just so your a better rounded character, and everyone couldn't get a easy hit in and knock you out. Know what I'm sayin'?

StevenSkiba wrote:The way your grid is, it is very weak against physically strong heroes, or villains.. Having 1 speed makes you as slow as a turtle, and 1 strength means ya can't even lift your own body weight, and you also don't have have super high durability, so a lot of characters could easily swoop in and take you out no problem. Fighting Skills is good, but if you only have 1 speed it only helps so much. I'd suggest making your PG a bit more like this,

INT: 5
STR: 2
SPE: 3
END: 2
EP: 6
FS: 4

Just so your a better rounded character, and everyone couldn't get a easy hit in and knock you out. Know what I'm sayin'?

INT: 6
STR: 1
SPE: 3
END: 2
EP: 6
FS: 4

Sergiy wrote:

Sul-Fury wrote:
And I find this part of the Character (A new addition) very questionable:

Sergiy wrote:
Powers:

Holds, Every Known Chemical in his blood steam. And Is immune, to Toxic. And the ones he produces.

Having every known Chemical in your blood stream will cause internal chemical mixes and cause your character to explode spontaneously. IDK if that's possible.

Should n';t An Alien be able to do that?

Alien would be able to Cover *A* toxic substance. Not every toxic substance in the known universe. Combining them is dangerous to you externally, imagine what it is like internally.

But should my Toxic manipulation, give me the possibility?

Sergiy wrote:But should my Toxic manipulation, give me the possibility?

The possibility that mixed Toxic chemicals won't explode within your body or cause a venomous gas to errupt within you? Not really, Toxic chemicals are still Toxic chemicals. That would be going back to the old Wolf arguments of defying Physics, and trying to make Light travel faster than the Speed of light. You can't change the laws of physics, or an elements attributes. Making water not wet, or fire not burn.

Edited anything else?

Re-approved with new stats, and descriptive background.

Flagged again for review. You are Roleplaying Differently from your Application, and there was an oversight on your limitations for Regeneration Powers.

You posted:

Sergiy wrote:"As Toxic, made his way down stairs, the officers, Begun to take guns at him, he opened his palm and produced acid, aiming at there heads, with great speed. Boiling there very skulls."

In the C-box you said that you used Toxins in your Blood Stream to create the Toxins you blast (Which is the reason you have an Immunity to Toxins). Thus, if you used the Toxic chemicals in your Blood stream to create these toxins, you would pass out of Blood Loss from one simple offensive attack. Therefore you pulled the Wild Card and said your Application had a High Regeneration Rate, in which it does say that and was overseen:

Sergiy wrote:Other Powers, Enhance, Re-negation, High Energy Projection, Body rarely ages, Small Speed Enhancement High Healing factorize.

Thus if you're going to say that your 6 EP can regenerate your blood loss instantly your Acid Powers would need to be weakened to compensate for your High Regeneration rate. Unless another mod disagrees.

I don't believe 6 EP would cover both a High Regeneration rate and a Mastery over a high offensive EP based power.

Moving to the trash section. To move back, simply PM me or another mod.