Kallen Dark

Real Name:Kallen Dark
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name:
Title: the whirlwind
Alignment:evil(with a bit of good)
Age:17(real age unknown)
Gender:Male
Race:vampire
Hair:long jet black
Eyes:golden
Height:5'10
Weight:136

Costume Description/Image: no costume in particular
Personality:Calm and cold,yet underneath that he can be kind to those he cares for.Due to being immortal he has an attitude of looking down on those he considers fools.With violent and borderline biopolar tendencies.Prone to violent out burst occasionally.

History:He was born in an alternate world known as aylid.A world of wonder,where magic was around as cars are today.At the age of seventeen he was turned by the vampire elder Lucien.From then on he was taken under his wing.Till one day the son of the god of darkness began a war against the Four central gods.In the final moments of his life he attempted to open a portal to a hell demension and drag everyone of them into it.By some strange twist of fate Kallen was the only one sucked into it,though instead of a hell demension he was spat out here.Confused and disoriented.He is forced to adjust to a place he has no knowledge about.Where everything is not as he knows.

Powers: He has immense strength,incredible healing,and speed.As well as the godess given gift of control over air.Including summoning tornadoes of great size,or powerful gust,but unable to perfome any form of flight.Though strength and speed is weakened by one point in the sunlight.Direct or other wise.Also like the rest of his kind.He is allergic to silver.Which would drain him of all his power.Leaving him like a normal human on cantact.
STR: 6
SPD: 5
END: 2
INT:2
EP: 5
FS: 2

Character Image/Description: His skin is as pale as snow,while in the sun it looks sickly and pale.His eyes are a strange and molten gold.Like his makers ever since he became a vampire.His hair is long flowing
an inch past his lips.A dark nightly black color.He prefers to wear baggy jeans and funny designer t-shirts he steals from the stores he comes across.He is thin so people assume he is weak.Also when he is about to feed two sharp fangs extend from his mouth.

Roleplay Sample: "The streets of this city truely stink"He thought to himself nose crinckled in disgust.This world was way different to the one he was used to.There were no dragons raoming or a great citidel of magic.Hell there wasn't even the same countries he had known!Also the humans were like vermin compared to the one in his world.Here they were more used to not having to fight for their lives."Damn this world"He cursed to himself followed by a strange scent.It was most likely a prostitute.He turned toward the smell night black hair flipping with him.He was right it was a prostitute.Looking at him in some mockery of a sexy face.Then he felt the hunger hit him again.He eyed her neck hungrily even though she was dirty and probably filled with stds.With barely a moment to think she was in his hands.Barely aware of what was happening.He bared his fang and sunk them into her neck.Feeling the gush of blood hit the roof of his mouth.Like liqued paradise as it hit his tounge.Even though he could taste the disiese in each drop.She went slack till all the blood from her was drained.He then let her fall to the ground with a thump.Before disapearing with a faint woosh.

This character needs a lot of work. Your personality and history are both very vague.

Your powers seem fine, just elaborate more on your control over wind. Does it allow psuedo-flight? If so, you must remove a point from your grid and have a base grid of 21.

These immortal characters are becoming a trend. We're getting a lot of vamps too. I will say that I'm not a fan of these kind of characters.

Needs more EP IMO. Also meh, when vampires become a problem we'll nip it in the bud. Immortal characters are becoming a staple though, that may be a problem.

I call for more Stat reductions. For Flight, and Immortals. Muahaha... Well, the only thing that bothers me is that people use the Immortal line to lose EP. Saying theyre born from another planet, or are of another race, so it doesn't require EP to have their powers.