Revet Saonsul

Joseph Pokakka wrote:The mountain was full of wondrous treasures, perilous traps, and powerful enemies for Daniel to face.

Intelligence is not the only thing you would need here. Your intellect may help you with traps, but not so much against powerful enemies. If anything, I'd give him more Fighting Skills, or at least a higher physical stat.
This is the Powergrid you had going into the mountain,
STR: 3
SPD: 3
END: 3
INT: 3
EP: 0
FS: 4

I'm just saying, could someone just above average in everything, fight off powerful enemies and evade hidden traps?

Elaborate dungeon? It was just room after room in a straight path with different puzzles and traps. It's more of a legend of zelda meets golden sun feel. Besides hoping to have more of Spider-man's intelligence because he's pretty smart and I think he could do it.

Also the reason for 4 FS is because he has only mastered sword fighting. Get it?

He isn't just "above average" everything. In fact all of his physical stats aren't above average. All of them are peak human and the guards don't get much stronger than 2 in all levels but they have the strength of numbers.

The only thing he has that can be considered above average is his intelligence. His intelligence is at a gifted but not quite genius level.

Well, Joe is a bit right by taking my opinion that serious. I think I did formulate a bit harsh, and I'm sorry if it offended you, Joe. I shouldn't have called your char a Sue.

But I am still of the opinion that you could make a far more interesting character than this dude.

Joseph Pokakaa wrote:Elaborate dungeon? It was just room after room in a straight path with different puzzles and traps. It's more of a legend of zelda meets golden sun feel.

Well to be far, you didn't put that in your history . Now that this is clear, I don't have any problem with the dungeon part. However I do agree with Soap that you could make a more interesting character, perhaps you could give this guy a longer history, show more of his personality and who he is.

The_soapmaker wrote:Well, Joe is a bit right by taking my opinion that serious. I think I did formulate a bit harsh, and I'm sorry if it offended you, Joe. I shouldn't have called your char a Sue.

But I am still of the opinion that you could make a far more interesting character than this dude.

I could but the staff keeps twisting my words... >_>

No we don't. You keep writing things wrong.

Gregor wrote:No we don't. You keep writing things wrong.

Or you keep on misenterpreting. It's just the way you look at it.
Point is; somewhere, sometime, someone fucked up something. Whatever.

I see no point in not approving of this application (though only the seal can truly approve ) even though I think it could be far more original than it is now. If you (*le Joe) could just truly specify the powers the Venus Stone gave your char (like what he can do with this control over plants and rocks), that'd be great.

Yes you guys did. The gravity manipulation powers you guys totally kept ignoring the fact I said the powers only worked as a ROPE. You kept saying it would increase my punching length or lifting abilities... wtf were you guys even talking about? It would work as an unbreakable rope and I'd have to pull it myself... You guys completely misunderstood the function of the power.

I never said that, though the lifting abilities makes sense, not the punching distance. That doesn't even sound like gravity manipulation though, so you did word it wrong.

Fuck...Why did I ever write that post...

Gregor wrote:I never said that, though the lifting abilities makes sense, not the punching distance. That doesn't even sound like gravity manipulation though, so you did word it wrong.

Well not you... spike and viva.

I didn't word it wrong at all I explained exactly how it worked and gave a comparison to something so so they'd understand.

My character used to create a connection to an object and his body through the use of gravitation. And using his own strength, he can pull an object with it.

Joe, you are confusing things you said with things you didn't.

I see no problem with approving this guy once I look over his powers once more, but you need to word things in your app no matter the circumstance.

As for the gravity manipulation, I commented before you said anything about rope like. I said you could increase your punching POWER, and lifting capabilities, BEFORE you mentioned it was rope like.

INCREASE
POWER
BEFORE
YOU
MENTIONED

Catching on?

VivaLaCult wrote:Joe, you are confusing things you said with things you didn't.

I see no problem with approving this guy once I look over his powers once more, but you need to word things in your app no matter the circumstance.

As for the gravity manipulation, I commented before you said anything about rope like. I said you could increase your punching POWER, and lifting capabilities, BEFORE you mentioned it was rope like.

INCREASE
POWER
BEFORE
YOU
MENTIONED

Catching on?

If you actually read the fucking description for gravity manipulation, you would have seen where it described a "lasso" physic. But I don't care anymore about it. Can I get this character approved?

I told you I wasn't going to be in charge of this app. All of our conversations took place on the chat box, all misunderstandings came from you not describing your powers well

Or it could have just been you not being able to understand anything at a 10th grade level >_>

-Superhuman Reflexes: Revet can dodge automatic bullets at point blank range.

Only problem I have with this application.