BRENT RYAN (starting clean with all new characters old ones trashed

Real Name:Brent Ryans
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Overkill
Title: Mr. Killtastic
Alignment: Evil FEARE assassin
Age: 33
Gender:Male
Race:Caucasian
Hair: Black
Eyes:Brown
Height: 6'5
Weight: 190

Costume Description/Image:

Personality:Dark,wise,ruthless,aggressive,

History:Brent was born into a poor family on the east coast, traveling a lot with them while they looked for work he never really got to experience childhood.The only thing he had going was his patriotism for his country. His parents died when he was 15 and he began to live life as an emancipated minor and after many long years of a rough childhood he left high school and joined the military, as there best in almost all fields he was assigned to the secret international task force called SPARTA TASK FORCE. They were the best of the best in all things, but when one mission to stop terrorists from capturing a nuclear bomb went wrong, he watched as 20 of the best soldiers in the world died, and the reason he didn't was because of his hidden power, he could resist the extreme temperature of the bomb through some sort of genetic mutation and because he was in the highly durable transport plane that was shot down moments before the bomb went off... but that is not all the radiation increased his mutations to were he gained even more powers.But he put down his arms and became a mercenary because he was changed about his views on the American government and the UN, he thought after his whole experience that the government was betraying soldiers by sending them where they would most likely die now he hates the USA and the UN.

Powers:
Extreme Heat Resistance
The ability to run at alarming speeds (after bomb) such as the speed of a speeding car.
Superior strength (AB) able to lift 1000 pounds
Ninja like agility (Training) Able to scale walls and etc.
Marksman (Training) very well rounded shot with all weapons (favors the Dragnouv SVu for some odd reason)
Combat Skills (Training) Hand to hand and fighting tactics

On top of all that he uses many special gadgets and weapons to aid him in combat, gadgets like grappling hooks and tracking devices.



Power Grid:
Int. 5
Strength. 3
Speed. 3
Energy Projection. 1
fighting skills 6
END. 3

Hey, dude,

My char used to be a mercanary too. We could make up a story that they were on the same squad (or on opposite squads) somewhere in the past. What do you think?

By the way, could you, perhaps, find a smaller picture? I can only see half his face now.

And one more thing: It is possible that Mr. Ryan survived the incinerating heat of a nuclear blast, and perhaps also the radiation, but what about the pressure created by the blast? How the hell did he survive that?

You also might want to fix your powergrid. As-is, you dont have a slot assigned to Durability. Just a quick fix

I like the idea of the same squad thing maybe... you could be his long lost son too... either way the son works because you would inherit his powers... and he survived the pressure because he was inside a downed transport plane.

And yes my durability is labeled END for Endurance

thatguywitdaface wrote:I like the idea of the same squad thing maybe... you could be his long lost son too... either way the son works because you would inherit his powers... and he survived the pressure because he was inside a downed transport plane.

And yes my durability is labeled END for Endurance

Dude, My char's in his 50's, so I doubt he could be Mr. Ryan's long lost son. And Mr. Karma has gained his powers due to witchcraft, not genetically.
The downed transport plane is good enough a reason for me. Though I do honestly think that the pressure would've crushed the airplane. Maybe it was a really really tough science-fiction airplane...

But I've got another list of requests:
Could you perhaps;
-Fix any inpropriate spelling (such as 'alarmngs', which ought to be 'alarming')
-Explain (briefly if you wish, extensively if you please) what young Brent was doing in highschool if his parents are traveling around all the time?
-Explain how your powers work, I.E. his running speedlimit, heat resistance limit, his area of expertize in combat skills (that includes marksmanship (If he excels in marksmanship, could you perhaps write down what weapon he prefers?)), etc. It doesn't have to be pages of information, just explain a little further.
-Edit (in the first post) the reason why the pressure of the atomic blast didn't make pancakes out of him.

And could you do me a favor, just a small one? Could you explain to me why he chose to work for the 'dark side', when his entire team got butchered by terrorists (and who are they? Muslims? Maoists? Fascists? Just randomly pissed off people?) with a Nuke. I mean, terrorists should be regarded as darksided (though they themselfs would indeed dispute that, since they'd believe they are fighting for a worthy cause). Why become darksided too? Doesn't make a lot of sense to me.

His history doesn't flow really well. Not a biggy but kinda weird. Approved.

Ahh finally a mercenary with similar skills to me... I would like to fight you.

A strength of 3 is superior?

Well according to a certain powergrid on which the system we use is based 3 on the scale is peak human capable of lifting twice their own body weight up to 800lbs.

Dude, Crimson Ghost is way fucking crazy! 0_0

I did all the editing