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Not a bad concept at all! My primary concern, however is the vague nature of the three "spells" she has. Especially considering the use of spells are to be more specific than powers thenselves are. These are all VERY broad.

What does it mean to become a Created Avatar? Do they inherit different stats? What does this all entail? If they gain new powers or features?

What items is she capable of summoning? Just anybitem.she can think of? Magical or otherwise? Rare items that only another PC might have?

Coding spells? This spell is part of a spell list. You're using a spell to have more spells? That's just a little over the boarder there.

Feel free to DM me or get in touch with me whenever you'd like if you feel i misunderstand something, or if you'd like active assistance with the app itself!

Thanks! I gave more details!

I just listed Coding Spells as giving more details on the nature of that particular power. Basically all of those bullet points are descriptive expansions on the initial power of coding magic (Reality coding/Hacking/Manipulation).

Alright. Look. This is a cool concept. I stick by that. I think what you're doing here though, is essentially covering TOO much ground for a STARTING character.

Summoning your avatars from games would be fine. If you didn't just list 6 characters, 7 if you include the PC herself.

Her items cover a lot of a basis. That's fine. I'm cool with this. These rings of infinitium need to be discussed though. I'm on vacation but I'll try my best to put my phone on alerts so you can get ahold of me.

The primary issue that we have here. There is no credible weakness here.


Weakness: Reality Coding/Hacking/Manipulation:

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Her mana pool is the key to this weakness. I've combat this over and there are only 4 times Mana is ever even mentioned in your app. [b] Summon Items: "who has many enchanted items that she can use to increase her magical power or mana pool.", This weakness (Weakness: Reality Coding/Hacking/Manipulation:), Weakness: Rings Of Infinium, and when referencing "Spells that take tons of mana might kill the caster, but Selina can cast them without that danger." This tells me that her mana pool can chance with her transformation into the avatars as well, which then means this weakness is not even a weakness either. Neglecting the fact her other items make it rather easy to keep mana high. This isn't really a weakness as far as I, or any of the other staff can tell.

Weakness: Enhanced Memory:

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Again this weakness is sort of obvious. Being nigh-omnisiac doesn't make you remember things you can't have seen to remember. Her bad eyesight would be a more credible weakness, however you run into the same problem here. Do her game avatars have the same weakness as her? Or do they counter this as well?


Weakness: Enhanced Learning:

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LIMITATIONS are not weaknesses. A limitation is something put on how a power works or hindering it mechanically. This isn't a weakness, It's common sense. Knowing how calculus and quantum theory doesn't make me able to physically make something to do that. Though if there were other genuine weaknesses I'd have thrown it a bone and taken it.


Weakness: Get Out More!:

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This weakness is EASILY circumvented with her powers. Because she can become any one of her game avatars. Her powers literally negate her weakness.


Reality warping/Reality Manipulation is a very, very heavily restricted power. I am open to the concept of allowing this character to do these things. But if they are going to be done, we need to have it done a certain way. Mostly because we have had other people with powers of reality warping and other natures which caused a surge in power abuse.

These are what I suggest.
1) Give pertinent weaknesses. Thinks that actually balance the power this person has.

2) Choose 2 Avatars. Fill them out as MINIONS. Each of these avatars needs to have a minion sheet. I'm sorry, it's a lot of work, but if she is going to change, there needs to be a list of their powers and weaknesses as well. Stick with a small number to start! You have the potential to advance your character. Each advancement could be a new Avatar from a game. Make it fun to go into the world and write your character growing and evolving.

3) Use the staff. This is a complex and awesome character. The Staff is here to keep things fair and make sure everyone follows the same rules to keep things balanced and make sure that everyone is treated with the same fairness and disgnity. This character is complex, which is awesome. It just means that if you involve us in, we can help you find ways to make it work, maybe even better than intended!

I'll keep my phone on for ya! feel free to DM me. I'll be on all day!

Hey Zell, thanks for the input! I'm planning on removing all the avatars except for the Hero Suit, making just their items available to be summoned.

I made some modifications to the weaknesses based on your comment.

I'm trying to tone her down just for simplicities sake. Essentially she's just going to be a magical hacker that can import items from her game world. Though I am keeping Hero Suit, which I still wonder if I have to make an NPC sheet for, because I'm doing away with the minion idea.

That being said, contact me on the discord, I need help!