Character Application

by Whelmed October 2nd 2016, 7:59 am

CHARACTER NAME
CHARACTER TITLE OR QUOTE

Basic Biography

Real Name: Hana Mingzhu
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Armor
Title: The Armor
Alignment: Hero
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Race: Chinese
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5'7
Weight: 130
Blood type: 0+

The Looks

Either include pictures in Spoilers, a smaller picture/s for the profile, or a very detailed description of your characters physical appearance and costume.

The Legacy

Personality:
She is rather brash and afraid of what the armor might make her do, one day.
History:
While on a school field trip, Hana visited an old European castle. There, she found a simple pair of boots made of metal. She put on the boots and was engulfed in an armor made of metal and chain-mail, with a sword thrust into her hands. After a few hours of freaking out, she discovered that she could make the armor go back into the boots. After dealing with the armor for a while, she was approached by men who knew about it. They wanted the armor, but Hana refused to give them it. After a long battle, she escaped and is still being hunted by the men who want the armor.

The Powers and Weaknesses

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1:
Enhanced basic attributes
Power 2:

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1:
Hana is often controlled by the armor and has little to no control of her actions.
Weakness 2:

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s):
She has basic enhanced powers, with unbreakable armor and an unbreakable short-sword.
Items/Minions
Boots that transform into The Armor.
Unbreakable short-sword.
Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Agility-1
Endurance-4
Reaction-2
Strength-3

by **Rozmer** October 2nd 2016, 9:55 am

Hi there Welmed and welcome to the site. We've got a few things that you're going to need to do before we can get you approved. First of all, we need some more info from her personality and history. Right now I know next to nothing about this girl. Where did she grow up? What's her relationship with her family? Does she have friends in school? How have those relationships shaped her view of the world? Why does she decide to become a hero? What about her made her decide to try on a pair of metal boots in an old castle? These questions are just a basis of things I'd like to know about this character that overall needs to be fleshed out more. I look forward to seeing what all you come up with.

Much like your history, her powers need considerably more detail as well. You mention the armor multiple times and yet I have no idea what it actually does. What you'll need to do for it is put the boots under items, give a detailed description of what the armor does and then give an appropriate weakness for the armor. The same goes for her power of enhanced attributes. We need to know what attributes are enhanced and to what degree Again, the more detail and the more you can tell us about this the better. Once you've made these edits post again to this thread and I'll reevaluate what you've got. Happy editing Smile

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