Dusker application

by **Dusker** July 29th 2016, 12:53 pm

CHARACTER NAME
CHARACTER TITLE OR QUOTE

Basic Biography

Real Name: Tyler wolfee
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Dusker

Alignment: LN
Age: 21
Gender: male
Race: Caucasian
Hair: short blonde
Eyes: pale blue
Height: 6'2
Weight: 170
Blood type: O

The Looks

Dusker is quite a tall guy, standing at 6'2 with a lean frame. He has pale blue eyes and short, messy platinum blonde hair. he has a small scar on his jawline and another just under is left eye.

dusker's outfit concludes mostly of black and white combat armor. he wears a black hoodie with white details on the arms and black combat pants underneath his body armor. this body armor is mostly black with the pads that protect his chest and shoulders being white. He wears a pair of white shin pads over the combat pants. lastly he wears a black metal mesh half mask on his face whenever he's fighting to counsel his identity.

The Legacy

Personality:
Tyler has a really up beat personality. it takes a lot to make Tyler upset or even angry. He likes to help people and make people laugh because happy people make him feel happy. If you do some how upset him or even worse make him angry he will show no mercy. When he's angry his usual talkative self just stops. He is insted replaced by a mute with no expression. If some was to try and attack him while in this state he would probably break them and break them slow.

History:
Tyler grew up as an Orphan.In this Orphanage (which was located in the poorer areas of the city of Los Angeles) care taker would beat the children into obedience. Because of this he learnt that not everyone is good and that some people aren't worth saving . At the Orphanage he met his long time friend Shaun. Shaun was a smart kid who always use to teach Tyler things because in school he would struggle to listen to the teacher. when his power developed his was put into a program for gifted children where he learnt to control his powers . One day the place where the program was held got destroyed by some guy. Tyler tracked the guy down and tried to kill him. he ended up being to afraid to kill the guy so he let the guy live, but no without hurting him. He wasn't a bad person. he still saw the good in the world. When he turned eighteen he decided to pick up his superhero persona of Dusker...

Story so far: Currently Tyler has had very few escapades but has had one notable thing happen to him. He was training with his master and met a girl called Diana. One thing led to another and his master, Hasashi, ended up unable to walk. He was then given the Kage Dokan so that he would be able to avenge his master. Along with this sword he received a black box and was told to open it in the darkness. When Tyler got around to doing so he was greeted by a mysterious phantom who had become his protector apon opening the box.

The Powers and Weaknesses

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1:
fast reflexes: With this power Tyler is able to realize when and where he is being attacked from faster than any normal human.

Power 2:
shadow constructs: Tyler can create constructs out of shadows. These constructs are black in appearance with what appears to be black smoke emanating from them. these constructs have no other special proprieties from there mundane counterparts.

power 3:
Phantom: thanks to his master Tyler gained a companion, the phantom. The phantom is a projection of his inner thoughts and has one soul job, protect the person who freed him from the boxes seal. The phantom is able to change its own shape, regularly turning into a 8 ft protector or a shadowy copy of Tyler. It is also able to block most in coming attacks for Tyler so that he can focus on fighting hand to hand. The phantom is a wraith and moves slower than most humans , 2 times slower in fact. in appearance it looks like a black figure with a kind of black smoky aura around it. The phantom is also able to speak in his masters voice. The phantom is only capable of blocking not attacking. The phantom is only able to become its 8 ft tall when in Tyler's shadow but if it wants to move out of the shadow it has to return to the mirror image of Tyler. The phantom can not be further than 10 ft away from Tyler, if it tries to move further than 10 ft away it will be simply blocked off. If Tyler starts to move while the phantom is away from his shadow then the phantom will be dragged along with him. The phantom can withstand anything that gives off less force than a sniper rifle.
When blocking the most it can do is push someone out of the way with a his hand in his protector form. This push can only move things that are under 200kg. this push will push the opponent away by 4 feet.

Power 4:
When Dusker becomes enraged he will go into shadow drive. In this state shadows aren't needed for him to create constructs. Also whilst in this state he will emit a kind of black smoke from which he creates shadow constructs out of. When in this state Tyler will become manic in nature and will most likely stand on all fours.

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1:
he can't make constructs when there are no shadows present.

Weakness 2:
his reflexes cannot transcend the speed of human movement. he will be able to notice something insanely quick but will not be able to move insanely fast.

Weakness 3:
his constructs can only reach out 6 ft in front of and around him.

Weakness 4:
the phantom can only defend Tyler. The most it can do is smack people away from him.

Weakness 5:
The phantom and Tyler don't have the same morals. The phantom will try and manipulate Tyler and make him kill people when he has no reason too.

Weakness 6: The phantom can only focus on one person when blocking.

Weakness 7:
The drive state does come at a price however. This form can only last for around 5 minutes/ 4 posts.

Weakness 8:
Also once he has been in drive mode for five minutes without being shaken out of it he will be unable to fight for around two hours because he will be knocked out.

Weakness 9: While in drive mode Tyler will not worry about blocking, making him very venerable to attacks in this state

Weakness 10: While in drive mode the phantom is locked away, making him unable to protect Tyler in this state. As a result leaving him defenseless.

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s):

the phantom will try and manipulate Tyler.

the phantom will be able to intimidate people because of it's appearance.

Tyler is able to preform parkour.

Tyler is a fast runner.

Tyler has a great poker face, he's never lost a game in fact.

Items/Minions
Uses two black M9 Beretta's. loaded with real bullets but he won't aim for the head on most enemies. they have no magical or super qualities/properties .

the Kage dōkan is a katana with a black blade and white bandaged handle. It can be used to harness Duskers shadow ability into more of a compact form. when he uses his power whilst holding the sword he's able to slash at the air to create waves of shadow that shoot out as projectiles and for a more melee situation the sharp end of the blade will start to construct a higher damaging blade that covers the normal one. note that he doesn't need to be in the shadows to do this, he only needs to be in the shadows when transferring his power to the blade.

weakness of Dokan 1: This blade can only hold the shadows for around 15 minutes/ 6 posts. before losing the power.

weakness of Dokan 2: Also once after about 20 attacks with the weapon it will be full depleted.

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Agility 2
Endurance 3
Reaction 1
Strength 4

by **Chellizard** July 29th 2016, 1:40 pm

Teleporting and Shadow Manipulation are two separate powers.

Your weaknesses aren't going to cut it, either. You also need 3 of them.

Shadows can be made by buildings casting a shadow. And "lightning fast reflexes" is vague enough to allow your character to dodge bullets.

So, please fix this.

And if the barettas are mundane, they're fine as is.

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Your history is rushed. Expand upon the concepts you have.

Where was the orphanage? Did he make any childhood friends, or enemies? Who destroyed the orphanage? Thinking up and making up characters for your OC's past allows for future conflicts in RP with other people - where the guy that destroyed the program could actually come after your character.

by **Dusker** July 29th 2016, 3:12 pm

I have edited the post.

by **Chellizard** July 29th 2016, 6:55 pm

Better.

Welcome to SHRP.

Approved and moved.

by **Thorgron** August 15th 2016, 8:45 am

Moved for edits

by **Dusker** August 15th 2016, 8:54 am

What I added:

A story so far part in the history section
A description of Tyler's physical appearance.
Added the phantom and the weaknesses of said phantom to the app.
Added the dokan and it's weaknesses to the app.
added drive mode and it's weaknesses.
Added RP mechanics.

by **Chellizard** August 22nd 2016, 1:56 pm

You need to further explain what Phantom can do.

by **Dusker** August 22nd 2016, 2:04 pm

edited

by **Thorgron** August 23rd 2016, 8:20 am

Reapproved

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