Evander Beck

by **Hellhound** October 14th 2014, 1:02 am

Evander Beck
"Silence is golden. Patience is a virtue. Both of them together create the key to life."

Basic Biography

Real Name: Evander Beck
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: The Outsider
Title: Outsider
Alignment: Renegade
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 236 pounds
Blood type: A+

The Looks

Casual Attire:

Crime Fighting Outfit:

Mask:

Outsider Marking:

The Legacy

Personality: Evander is a go-wherever-the-wind-takes-me kinda guy. He's quick. Sneaky. A thief, if you will. Tries his best not to get caught, and is quick to get out of a sticky situation. He's very reliant on his wits and quick thinking, and a little on his fighting skills. He prefers to work alone, but takes help when needed.

History: Evander was born into a low-class family. He took a hell of a beating-- mentally and physically-- every day of his adult life. He took up work as a blacksmith, since it seemed to be the only thing he was even slightly good at. On his way home from work one day, he was pulled into an alleyway. He was beat down by a few men in a gang, and then promptly stabbed in the gut. He nearly died. He eyes were full of hope, hope that he could survive the ordeal, and he did. The next morning, his wound had completely healed (this isn't one of his Powers, as he was healed by the supernatural force). He felt better. Faster, stronger. More alert. Awake. He had been reborn. He wasn't going to let it go to waste. With half of the money he had collected from his work, he spent it on Fighting Lessons, Parkour Tutorials, and stuff of that sort. He used the rest to hire a few men to build a smithery in his basement. That was where he built his weapons and his mask.

The Powers

Power 1: Enhanced Senses: Evander was given enhanced senses, which came with these:

Dark Vision: See living/dead/unconscious persons/animals, their sight cones, and Evander's sounds through solid objects. Also see resources and machinery/traps.

Power 2: Supernatural Abilities: Evander was also given Supernatural Abilities, which came with these:

Blink: Teleport forward 600 feet and a shorter distance upward. Cooldown = The number of times he has used it (i.e. 5 times - 5 post cooldown).

Pull: Pull can be used to lift inanimate objects, collect and pilfer items. Pull can lift bodies, living enemies are bound and can be choked out or executed.

Grid
Intelligence: 2
Occult: 2
Strength: 4
Speed: 6
Durability:
Ability: 2 (Senses) 5 (Pull) 5 (Blink)
Fighting Skills: 4
Magic:
Spells:
Flight:
Wealth:

Disclaimer: I own none of the costume, or the powers, or anything to do with The Outsider. All rights to those go to Dishonored.

by **Entei** October 14th 2014, 1:40 am

Your abilities have no points allocated next to them, and you have FAR too many sub powers under each power. Fix this before we can even begin to move on.

by **Hellhound** October 14th 2014, 2:04 am

Edited

Took out a few sub-powers, took away all of the powers listed as II and just put them as I, and allocated 6 points to each (6 to Supernatural and 6 to Senses)

by **Draiken** October 14th 2014, 5:38 am

Firstly you can't bend time so you'll need to remove that power.

Also, you need to allocate separate points to each of your powers as teleportation, telekinesis and agility cannot all be counted as one thing because they are too varied.

by **Hellhound** October 14th 2014, 12:29 pm

Odien said that a character could make the illusion that time is going slower than it really is if they had high enough SPD and FS.

Allocated points to each power.

by **Draiken** October 14th 2014, 1:32 pm

If they had high speed and FS then time could appear slowed to an extent, but your speed and FS aren't particularly high and even then it couldn't be to the extent that time would be anywhere near frozen.

by **Hellhound** October 14th 2014, 1:42 pm

I see. Took the power out completely.

by **Entei** October 14th 2014, 2:31 pm

Your character has no intelligence, and no occult. In other words, he's brain dead. He's a vegetable.

by **Hellhound** October 14th 2014, 3:04 pm

Gave him 2 INT points.

by **Entei** October 14th 2014, 5:51 pm

Agility isn't a power, either. Just put the points into speed or FS. FS being your agility, speed being your well, speed. Using an ABI to get both is a no.

by **Hellhound** October 14th 2014, 6:17 pm

Put points into FS and SPD, took out Agility.

by **Chellizard** October 15th 2014, 5:20 am

This character's history hits too close to home with the Dishonored lead character Corvo Attano.

Despite the minor differences, it's just too close and could be considered copyright infringement.

As I'd like to avoid that at all costs, I'd appreciate it if you mixed up his backstory a bit more, and made it less like the first ten minutes of gameplay from the actual game.

by **Hellhound** November 1st 2014, 6:54 pm

Edited the History. A lot.

by **Draiken** November 5th 2014, 12:12 pm

Obviously player attacks from pull are still permission based and remember you can't use teleportation to jump behind somebody and gain an advantage in a fight!

Other than that you're all good to go, so approved!

by Sponsored content

Evander Beck

Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Edited M9

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck

Re: Evander Beck