Ash

"Ash's my name... don't wear it out."
 
Basic Biography
 
Real Name: Ashley "Ash" Griffin
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: N/A
Title: "The Ash Man"   "Griffin"   "Gadget"   "the Buff"   "head honcho"
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Race: Human Caucasian
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 162 lbs.
Blood type: O negative
 
 
The Looks
 
Ash has very plain features, although he is noticeable to the opposite sex, he isn't thought of as a 'gorgeous hunk of meat'. Ash has three long scars across his chest from when he was clawed by a wolf as a child. He has a very lean style of muscle on his body. Not to small not too big but lean. He wears a blue long sleeved button up shirt that he rolls the cuffs up on. He also wears long khaki boot cut pants with black work boots.
 
The Legacy
 
Personality:
 
Ashley is a little full of himself... Nuff said really, but you want more... so I'll give it to ya! Deep down in side of him at the very lowest level of his heart he holds his depression, his fears, his anxiety, he holds it all there underneath the dam of oppressiveness. He mostly flaunts around, trying to pick up chicks to hide his loneliness. But other than that, nothing gets in his way of a target, not even the target itself. Do or die as always been his motto. He also takes after Ash Williams from the movies Evil Dead and Army of Darkness, great movies by his standards, big fan of Bruce Campbell, hero of his, he even tries to break the 4th wall sometimes, but that's only in his head... right?
 
History:
 
Growing up with five brothers and 3 sisters, he had to strive for his parents attention. As a young child he would, instead of causing trouble, tried his hardest in school and got all of the best grades. As a teenager he tried out and did almost every sport the school had to offer, Football, Soccer, Lacrosse, Baseball, Tennis, Track, Basketball. His plate was always full yet he always somehow had time for his family and girlfriend. He had the same girlfriend since he was in 8th grade all the way up to senior year when they graduated, his girlfriend left him to focus on her school work. This broke Ash severely, ad set him in a deep depression. He lost all of his scholar ships, any teams that wanted to hire him to join their sports retracted their offers, he was a broken man with no place to turn to. However he still wanted to be the jewel in his parents eyes so he set off. He found work as a salesman for the local super market. And soon rising up through the ranks became manager.
His 5 brothers eventually left down to start a big corporation that would go on to control almost all of the weapon manufactures and weapon distributors in the world. It was a growing world and it needed security. His brothers offered him a place in their business, but Ash refused as he didn't want to take any special deals from his family when he had a good paying job already, although it wasn't a job that could support a family, but it was enough to support him.
As his life kept going on and on it progressively got worse. His 3 sisters, now at the tender age of 18, 15, and 10 were now either leaving school or really starting to... star school. However Ash now was close to being 30 all of his older brothers were close to their mid to late 40's and early 50's. Their business was booming, still the offer stood for Ash to join, but he still refused.
When the attack on New York happened he lost the little respect to the meta humans that he had, so he took up arms against the meta humans and has since decided to take them out one by one, utilizing his connections with the big weapons manufactures to get all of his equipment. After a year or so of his ongoing homicidal tendencies, killing both hero and villain alike, as well as the monster on the side, his brothers took up arms with him. They gave him all of the money he could ever want, funding his quest for human dominance, and letting him go wild and free. The Ash man never backs down. Even in the face of death, he preservers.
 
 
The Powers
 
Power 1: 'Crack Shot!' With any weapon he carries he can hit anything from any distance, however his favored gun is the shotgun. Doubled Barreled slice o' heaven, or a handled piece of cake right to the head and your out. He can hit a target, he's good at it but can't hit it 100% of the time.
 
Power 2: 'Explosives Expert'  When dealing with those pesky meta humans you gotta' know how to blow'em up if you want to make'em dead.
 
Power 3: 'Rain Man? Perhaps...' Has the smarts to recognize a meta human anywhere... (cause of their cape... duh) Simple equations work best for him, but he'd rather go with Boom! than 'that's the answer!' A, sixth sense if you will, helps him locate and find the meta humans, and then when he finds them, he takes them down. Through years of hunting he's gotten good at tracking them down and finding out who and what they are and are capable of. However it is more than experience that he uses, with his intelligence he can almost see the heroism or evilness of the character.
 
 
Grid
Intelligence: 7
Occult:
Strength: 3
Speed: 3
Durability: 4
Ability: 1
Fighting Skills: 7
Magic:
Spells:
Flight:
Wealth: 5

You have five ABI, but, I have no idea what those points are allocated for by your page. Needs to be specified before I can really go any farther in the approval process.

Secondly, the power 'crack shot', as long as the 'he can hit anything from a distance' is just fluff to make your character more interesting, it's fine. Otherwise, One-hundred percent hit techniques are a no-no.

okay, also the Crack Shot power is fluff, he can hit a target, he's good at it, but not 100% of the time, it's just fluff, filler. Also would I separate the ability? or just put them into new slots? I like my character right now, I wouldn't know where to put the other 5 points...

You don't have to put ABI into your character to make them good at shooting a gun, so you can take out those two ABI if you want, and allocate them somewhere else.

Explosive expert also doesn't require ABI, as your ability to use such technology would be under int. You could use ABI I suppose, but your dynamite and other explosives would only hit as hard as the amount of ABI you put into them. At the moment, it would hit as a 2 ABI ability, which is a tickle to most characters with a decent DUR. However, if you put the two points into int (And the 2 from Crackshot) you'll have seven int, which will make your dynamite hit as a level 7 ABI, or you can make a gun at 7, dynamite at six, and vice versa.

Power three seems fine, though I would like a better reason than he just has the ability. Maybe something 'spidey-sense' esque even, but it does need some description of how he does it. Use your imagination, the options are limitless! An enhanced sense like that would also only need one ABI, so that gives you another point to free up!

Approved.