Victor Kreed(Done)

by **Victor Kreed** August 20th 2014, 12:26 am

Victor Kreed
"If you don't have the guts to do what needs to be done, then I will take the liberty of doing it myself."

Basic Biography

Real Name: Victor Kreed
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: N/A
Title: N/A
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Race: 1/3 human, 1/3 Lizard, 1/3 robot
Hair: None
Eyes: Black and red
Height: 7' 1"
Weight: 280 lbs.
Blood type: 3/4 O, 1/4 unknown

The Looks

The top right part of Victor's head is a grey, shiny, metallic metal with a red optic prosthetic eye. The rest of his face is reptilian with rough, hard scaly skin and also equipped, with white, sharp, teeth. He has a human left eye wit ha black iris, the pupil in the shape of a lizards. His entire chest is a robotic grey and white chest plate. His abdomen is green and scaly. His left shoulder is entirely robotic. Vic's upper right arm is entirely human, the color of an African American man, however the lower arm and hand is reptilian equipped with black claws. His left arm is more muscular and entirely reptilian with 4 inch black claws on his hand. Both his pelvis and legs are reptilian as well, with robotic attachments on them. Kreed has a long, green tail with has robotics attached to them to replace the damaged parts. He is overall a strong and muscular man, his look is threatening without a shadow of a doubt.

Fire demon state:

Spoiler:

Gets 3 feet taller.

Victor has invented a device capable of making an illusion that he looks like a normal human being. In this state, he looks like an average, 5' 11" African American man, with a black hair, in a buzz cut style. He is wearing blue jeans, a white t-shirt, with a blue, long sleeved jacket over it.

The Legacy

Personality: Victor tends to be a very serious man. He almost never smirks, giggles, or anything of the sort. He maintains his focus on the task at hand, never stopping until achieving his goal. To permanently change his appearance, but keep his superhuman abilities for his own purposes. Vic rarely teams up with anyone, but when he does. He usually plans to betray them if they either pose a threat, or he gets what he wants. However, he has little expectations to hold up their side of the bargain if there is one in place.

History:
Kreed was born on January 4, 1994. His parents were Dr. Frank Kreed, and Mrs. Katelyn Kreed. Frank was a biologist, who was at the time researching reptiles, specifically lizards. Victor grew up a smart child, thanks to his mother, who had him reading day after day. Vic would read anything from newspapers to high school textbooks. Kreed was usually at the top of his classes, and by the age of 13 he was already reading college textbooks. Mostly about biology, physics, math, and language arts. When he went to high school, he was half-way through the book Moby Dick.

Reading wasn't the only thing Victor was good at, as he did multiple math equations in his free time, and was working on calculus by his freshman year. Many of the other kids were marveled by this, and envied his knowledge. Vic would often times correct people on usage of words or math terms and it would often get him in trouble. Realizing that his son was fa beyond that of the high school level, and Mr. Creed took him out of school during sophmore year and home schooled him. At age 18, Mrs. Kreed came down with cancer, resulting in her left leg being amputated. Katelyn went into a deep state of depression, not talking to anyone, and seemed to rarely get out of bed.

Eager to help his wife, Mr. Kreed built a machine to merge the lizard DNA with Human's, in an effort to have Mrs. Kreed regeneratee her leg. However, he had to test it out on something, and his funding didn't cover test subjects, so he looked to his son. Reluctantly, Victor agreed to help him out. Mr. Kreed put a lizard in a small glass tube, and Victor in the opposite one, activating the machine, the lizard and the boy were merged together, however Mr. Kreed had miscalculated the efficiency of the cooldown system, and the machine overheated, and the resulting explosion,had almost killed Victor. His body was greatly distorted and torn apart, since the machine was destroyed in the middle of the transfer, the gene for regeneration was lost. Mr. Kreed had worked with Victor giving him advanced prosthetic parts.

Waking of three days later, Victor was horrified with his new body, his father tried to comfort him. but only made him angrier. Vic went into a fit of rage, and killed his father. Realizing that his mother would be horrified, he stayed at the lab, using the resources there to make a mask like object that when worn, would create the illusion to him looking like someone else. When he was finished, he ran away and took a year and a half trip to Lousiana and made a living there, as an accountant. Late in his lifetime ,he had heard about the attack on NYC, and realized that he had to be as ruthless as the villain who attacked it to get what he wanted, a new body, something completely human so he not hide behind the mask.

Doing more research, he had discovered a magick spell book, one that could maybe get him back to normal. He went the book store to purchase it, when he took it home, he had a strange feeling that something wasn't right, however, he went through with it. However, something went horribly wrong. The book only had fire-based spells, and the one he used the to get a new body transformed into a raging fire beast bent on destruction. When he transformed back into his regular self, he was very tired and was nausous. He also noticed that he looked the same and that he could now transform into the monster at will. Disgusted at the book's failure, he destroyed it after full recovery, and decided that while he had his new abilities, he might as well use them. He upgraded his shoulder, making it a cannon and enhanced his optic sensors. He also grew attached to his new powers and the fire abilities he gains within the monster state.

Victor grew attached to his powers, and had a new goal. To permanently change his appearance to look normal, but also keep his abilities. Kreed believed it could be done, and he swore he would find a way to do it.

By any means necessary.

The Powers

Power 1: Super Strength: Cybernetic and reptilian enhancements enable Victor to live vehicles 2 to 3 times his size. Also, he has extra strength in his legs, so that Kreed can jump up to 20 to 30 feet in the air.

Power 2: Durability: With his metallic and scaly skin, Vic can withstand blows that would seriously injure a normal human being. A sword would not be able to cut into him as easy as human flesh. He can take falls from skyscrapers, or an explosion from a wrecked car. Or a punch that would send him flying through multiple buildings.

Power 3: Transformation: Ever since he made that flame demon spell, he is able to transform into a bulky, firey demon at will. An almost unstoppable force of destruction, It's endurance 10 to 15x depending on how much rage or engery has been put into the transformation. His physical attacks are much more powerful than usual. However, each transformation must put an immense amount of energy into it, leaving Kreed feeling fatigue and vulnerable in this state. He is only able to keep the transformation for up to 3 hours, before changing back against his will.

Power 4: Fire manipulation: When in his fire demon state, he is able to make a 4 ft fire sword, and shoot fireballs out of his hands. Also able to breath fire, and burn on contact. He cant absorb fire attacks to some extent. Though if it gets to much, he'll end up taking very little damage if at all.

Grid
Before transformation:

Intelligence: 4
Occult: 0
Strength: 5
Speed: 3
Durability: 8
Ability: Fire Manipulation: 6
Ability: Transformation: 2
Fighting Skills: 2
Magic: 0
Spells: 0
Flight: 0
Wealth: 1

After Transformation:

Intelligence: 2
Occult: 0
Strength: 5
Speed: 3
Durability: 8
Ability: Fire Manipulation: 8
Ability: Transformation: 2
Fighting Skills: 2
Magic: 0
Spells: 0
Flight: 0
Wealth: 1

by **Chellizard** August 21st 2014, 8:34 pm

All right, for starters, you get 30 starting points for your grid's stats.

These stats are:

INT/OCC: Intelligence / Occult
STR: Strength
SPD: Speed
DUR: Durability
ABI: Ability
FS: Fighting Skills
MGK: Magic
SPL: Spells
FLI: Flight

As you've listed your powers:

Victor Creed wrote:Power 1: Super Strength: Cybernetic and reptilian enhancements enable Victor to live vehicles 2 to 3 times his size. Also, he has extra strength in his legs, so that Kreed can jump up to 20 to 30 feet in the air.

Power 2: Durability: With his metallic and scaly skin, Vic can withstand blows that would seriously injure a normal human being. A sword would not be able to cut into him as easy as human flesh. He can take falls from skyscrapers, or an explosion from a wrecked car. Or a punch that would send him flying through multiple buildings.

Power 3: Transformation: Ever since he made that flame demon spell, he is able to transform into a bulky, firey demon at will. An almost unstoppable force of destruction, It's endurance 10 to 15x depending on how much rage or engery has been put into the transformation. His physical attacks are much more powerful than usual. However, each transformation must put an immense amount of energy into it, leaving Kreed feeling fatigue and vulnerable in this state. He is only able to keep the transformation for up to 3 hours, before changing back against his will.

Power 4: Fire manipulation: When in his fire demon state, he is able to make a 4 ft fire sword, and shoot fireballs out of his hands. Also able to breath fire, and burn on contact. He cant absorb fire attacks to some extent. Though if it gets to much, he'll end up taking very little damage if at all.

I'm going to do a power break down for your grid now:

For starters, you want your character to be a strong, durable guy with high stamina, and fire manipulation, correct?

As you've listed his powers, the only ones that work off of ability are Transformation and Fire Manipulation.

You need 2 separate ability bars, so your grid will look like this:

Grid
Intelligence:
Occult:
Strength:
Speed:
Durability:
Ability: (Transformation)
Ability: (Fire Manipulation)
Fighting Skills:
Magic:
Spells:
Flight:
Wealth: 1 (Everyone starts with 1 wealth; it is basic wealth, and does not count toward or against your 30 point starter grid)

Now, on to dividing your points to show your characters powers.

This is the Grid YOU made:

Okay, so here's the grid I think you should use:

Revised "Human" Grid (Before Transformation: 30 points):

Transformed Victor Grid: 30 points:

So, if you have any questions, you can reply to your app, or PM me. (:

by **Victor Kreed** August 21st 2014, 8:51 pm

Revised

by Jason Masters August 21st 2014, 8:52 pm

Looks good now. Approved.

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