Colton's Bio

Any stat that is five or higher is considered a power. Please list them accordingly. Flight is a power, of course. But please explain how he can fly.

His personality and history is lacking in detail as well; please add more.

His personality still needs a bit of work. For instance, you say he's indifferent but also a showoff. Is his indifference less of a surface personality trait and more how he treats people in general? When he drinks does he get angry? Loud? Aggressive? Happy? How does he interact with people?

The thing about his college degrees should go in his history, as they wouldn't be considered part of his personality unless it was something he was passionate about. You don't have to justify his intelligence (if that's what you were doing), we'll believe you

Also, like Chell said, please tell us how he flies. Was he born with the ability? Did he get it through an accident or experimentation? Can you tell us how he discovered the powers?

I'm extremely hesitant to approve Colton having Asperger's unless you can assure me that you have experience with the syndrome and can portray it well. You added it in fairly out of the blue and there is nothing in his history about it, so you can probably see why I'm nervous. Right now it seems more like you've written that in as a quirk, as opposed to something that is quite defining for a person. If you want to keep that, you're going to have to change his history to include when he was diagnosed, why he was taken to be diagnosed (what symptoms he showed that prompted his parents to take him to a psychologist), how it has influenced his life especially in regards to how people treat him. You will also need to expand upon it in his personality. Is he ashamed of it? Does he hide it so that people will treat him better?

On another note the personality is fairly contradictory at the moment, not to mention it still needs to be expanded upon. Here's a sample personality to help you out:

"Sadie is manipulative, distrusting, and charismatic. Upon first meeting someone, Sadie would appear reserved, but as the interaction went on she would study the other person's reactions to her and change her behavior to put them at ease. After all, it is much easier to manipulate someone when their guard is down. Meanwhile, she never lets her own guard down. Only one person has ever been allowed to see her true self, the vivacious yet somewhat broken girl within. Though she does sometimes show glimpses, when she teases any hero or cop who tries to foil her thefts or when she can be heard laughing into the darkness after a particularly thrilling heist.

But her true colors are usually seen when she is alone. Sometimes she will fall into bouts of loneliness and melancholy. However she rarely lets herself dwell on those feelings long. Her preferred method of pushing down her feelings involves going to bars or clubs, drinking heavily, and then going home with strangers. It's not an ideal method by any definition, but it works for her."

Yours doesn't have to be as long, we just need to get a better sense of who he is.

I have Aspbergers.

That's all the assurance I need, but I am still going to have to ask for more detail.

Approved until stated otherwise.