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Breeze 15x great-grandson of Poseidon
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Breeze 15x great-grandson of Poseidon
BTW: SPP is shorthand for Super Powered Person
BREEZE
"I dunno what my parents were thinking, naming a water-user like me 'Breeze'"
BREEZE
"I dunno what my parents were thinking, naming a water-user like me 'Breeze'"
Basic Biography |
Real Name: Breeze (Last name unknown) Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Breeze (He's an SPP 24/7) Title: Descendant of the Vengeful Alignment: Neutral/Good Age: 18 Gender: Male Race: Human/Humanoid Hair: Dark Brown Eyes: Flickering sea-green/blue Height: 6'2" Weight: 235 Blood type: O |
The Looks |
Breeze may look like a young, college teen out looking for the next cool party, but he is known to be a mighty force of unforgiving power. His shoulder-length wavy brown hair turns a blue color whenever he channels his powers and his eyes, normally a soothing sea-green/blue, becomes a bright white. Breeze has a continually tanned complexion and only a faintly muscled build despite his weight. He also has slightly large feet. Breeze's costume consists of a breastplate with silver trim and blue shoulder-guards. He is always in a blue long-sleeved shirt and he throws on silver arm and leg greaves. His pants too, are blue and appears to stretch down to Breeze's feet like a onesie, but in actuality is separated under his leg greave. Breeze also has a gold-colored belt under the breastplate. In the center of the breastplate is a circle with a gold-embossed "B". This "B" is (was) Breeze's signature. |
The Legacy |
Personality: Breeze is humble though he does speak his mind if the need requires it. Even about his powers, Breeze acknowledges that there are greater SPPs who may know more about his power than he does. A believer of fair play, he generally dislikes those who cheat to get ahead and would preferably win under his own power than with some handicap. This in mind, he is not overly prideful nor stupid. He is very aware of his limitations (though he pushes the boundaries of his strength every now and again), and is not above asking for help. Again, he isn't prideful either, so he doesn't thoroughly humiliate others either, even if they deserve it. Funnily, he is more than willing to talk to others and share his goals...though he lacks an ultimate goal (see History, but with him not having clear memories of his past, he doesn't really see any clear-cut future). Breeze's personality is actually more like a person much older than he is.* History: Breeze came from a different universe. The universe from which he belonged had him as being one of the most powerful SPPs in existence. Breeze had a strong SPP lineage. He was known to be the fifteenth descendant of Poseidon, however, due to a prophesy, every son in that line was destined to kill their father until such a time when two sons were born to the same father. The prophesy came true and the trend continued until Breeze's grandfather (a fire SPP) had Volty (Breeze's father) and Antibody. Volty killed his father and intended to kill Breeze as well to ensure that he wouldn't die. However, due to an unfortunate string of events, Breeze (who was only 2 BY*) accidentally triggered an escape pod away from Volty's planet and landed on a fertile planet where he grew up and harnessed his own power. He continued dodging Volty for all his life, getting more and more powerful and gaining some allies until he felt strong enough to confront his father. However, in his attempt to defeat his father once and for all, Breeze called on his "Golden form" (which is basically super sayan for SPPs) and ended up breaking the universal power limit. He "died" and was resurrected on this new Earth with false memory of his previous self and a fairly low amount of super power and ability. *Note: BY means Breeze years. Normal SPPs live 200 years = 1 SPP year, however since Breeze's family interbred with humans, the lifespan diluted until Breeze lived 3-4 years for every 1 BY. |
The Powers |
Power 1: Water manipulation (in this case, all types: ice, snow, steam) Power 2: Marine animal communication (including those NOT on Earth) Power 3: (Note: the rest of his powers "come standard" with SPPs of Breeze's universe) Space/Underwater living Power 4: Above-average strength/speed Power 5: Flight Grid Intelligence: 5 Occult: 0 Strength: 4 Speed: 4 Durability: 4 Ability: 5 Fighting Skills: 5 Magic: 0 Spells: 0 Flight: 3 Wealth: 0 |
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Registration date : 2013-10-29
Re: Breeze 15x great-grandson of Poseidon
Hi. Welcome to Superhero RPG.
The character idea is a bit iffy in my honest opinion, considering we like to go with lots of originality over all. But, the distance between relation to Poseidon is doable.
For starters, please read this: https://www.superhero-rpg.com/t5264-stat-equivalents
Also this: https://www.superhero-rpg.com/t5228-the-rulebook
I will say this:
You only have 2 points for Flight.
You cannot have control over Ice, Water, Snow, and Steam. It is one of the four.
You cannot use only 5 Ability points to control an element as well as talk to marine wildlife. That requires a separate Ability bar and separate points to cover it.
You cannot be so vague with his powers. "Coming Standard" is not how we do things here.
So, please be sure to read the stat equivalents and rule book from top to bottom, and we'll see from there.
The character idea is a bit iffy in my honest opinion, considering we like to go with lots of originality over all. But, the distance between relation to Poseidon is doable.
For starters, please read this: https://www.superhero-rpg.com/t5264-stat-equivalents
Also this: https://www.superhero-rpg.com/t5228-the-rulebook
I will say this:
You only have 2 points for Flight.
You cannot have control over Ice, Water, Snow, and Steam. It is one of the four.
You cannot use only 5 Ability points to control an element as well as talk to marine wildlife. That requires a separate Ability bar and separate points to cover it.
You cannot be so vague with his powers. "Coming Standard" is not how we do things here.
So, please be sure to read the stat equivalents and rule book from top to bottom, and we'll see from there.
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Nekromonga (08/23/2017 10:05PM): Chellizard the Internet Born, Mother of Nerds, first of her name, Queen of the Gamers and the Roleplayers
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Re: Breeze 15x great-grandson of Poseidon
I read both links. I kinda felt it would be a stretch for my old superhero Breeze to make it onto here. He did come from a different universe after all (the superhero universe in my head). Things are a little different that way. As for originality, I understand where you're coming from. Just by taking his two legitimate powers (water and animal communication), he sounds very much like aquaman or some of the other SPPs on here. In terms of his relation to Poseidon, he wouldn't be related to him on this website, only in the universe from which he came, therefore his ancestry and background really do not come into play at all.
I thank you for being polite and sharing those links. I now have a clearer idea what all this is about. I am willing to have this character scrapped so I can make one that better fits.
I thank you for being polite and sharing those links. I now have a clearer idea what all this is about. I am willing to have this character scrapped so I can make one that better fits.
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Re: Breeze 15x great-grandson of Poseidon
Character scrapped.
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Nekromonga (08/23/2017 10:05PM): Chellizard the Internet Born, Mother of Nerds, first of her name, Queen of the Gamers and the Roleplayers
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Number of posts : 5019
Location : The Internet
Age : 31
Job : I Work Full time/Artist/Charizard Enthusiast
Humor : [18:47:50] Spirit Corgi : Dear mods, I need my apps unapproved. If you don't do it an orderly time, I will compare you to nazis and tell everyone how you are stiffening my creativity, yours truly, a loving member of the site.
Registration date : 2009-11-15
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