Severe Punishment

by **Halite** October 13th 2011, 6:27 am

"Question. What do these things all have in common? Everybody knows I'm a motherfreaking Monster."

Overall
Real Name: Abigail Severity Tiberius IV
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Severity
Title: The Owner of Tiberius International , Monster , Celtic
Alignment: Supremely Evil
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Race: [Egyptian/Irish] African American
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
Height: 6'3ft
Weight: 122lbs

Costume Description/Image

Spoiler:

Personality:
When it comes to "keeping your cool" it does not really apply to Severity. He is not one too lash out and do something irrational, but it is quite easy too push his buttons, enough too where his only desire will be too hurt or destroy whatever seemed too have got on his nerves, however this does not always mean he will resort too violence. He rarely actually is seen visibly upset, but a few mannerisms can show when he is upset. Such as a tone of voice change and the twitch of his left-brow. He is irish, and due too this he has a THICK irish accent. He isn't really the violent sort, well actually. He himself would never call it violence, except a mutual release of bliss shared between him and whoever his victim might be at the time. He simply loves to call the entire ritual of violence "The joining of Nirvana." He is for lack of a better word, a sadist. Especially when his anger picks up. He seems to enjoy beating and mutilating anything. Be it a creature or a fellow human. Regardless of the circumstance whenever he is the slightest bit pissed, he just seems to come forth and exact his rage upon those around him. This is usually however whenever something important is at stake, he is a monster, and therefore knows not too let his emotions get the better of him under any circumstance. However his most terrifying trait is that he is worse when he isn't angered. It is widely known through his circle that he is a maniac. At times. His complete and utter disregard for the well-being of others simply drives him to commit acts of the diabolical nature at the most random spurs of time. When he is not hindered by the thought of consequence.

He indulges in the sweet "passion" as he calls it, that he shares with anything that makes contact with those weapons of his. He does not cover up his problem nor make excuses for it. He knows exactly what he does and enjoys every last minute of it. However keeps a sort of high-class attitude about himself. He simply does whatever he wants as long as it does not conflict with whatever plans his organization has already stated. He owns a corporation and as the head of it he does not go out committing random murders and such. However, he is a very dangerous enigma. He has not shown this sadist side in awhile and has been seen as a more caring and compassionate man. However this is due recently to a few traumatic experiences and he is suffering from the withdrawal of it. He is more cocky then usual, talking about himself highly, and considering himself too be one of the greatest assets too the world. When he finally comes too again, everyone will see how he really is once more. He often brags about his accomplishments and his actions are better suited for a super-hero more then anything else. But due to his ability to keep himself in check and keep himself refined and dignified, he fits the role he was given quite well. He holds no grudge and no judgment for any of his victims, and he rarely does mourn their deaths if it comes to that. He simply embraces his human nature, as he states, and believes that humans act too out of character now. He is a living contradiction. As described by a few people who have served with him in the past “He is simply a monster in elegant finery.”

History:
Born in the ghetto the young male of the Tiberius family was not under the custody of his father rather his drug addicted mother. It was a life full of neglect from both parents as he would sit and watch his neighbor never get any better. Despite the efforts of the police and the super-heroes who were charged too protect the world from these low-lives It was a sad display really, watching all his heroes prove that his neighborhood and its citizens where minuscule in importance too these heroes. As if his location had been somehow plagued horribly. Being so young, he didn't look up too any heroes. He found that his reality was a harsh one. Especially considering that he was the only kid of his nationality around with an accent he was often teased daily by the other students. Until he discovered that he was a very good speaker. Many people stated that he was quite the bright young man and that it was rare. That he could actually help change how his neighbor hood was going. That he could be one of the few men too actually save it from the course it was going.

It sure did sound like a good plan, but then again it sounded like it was a fantasy. He never acted on the praise, instead used his influence too shape the neighbor hood in his own image. He started a gang with a few of his friends. Had a few run-ins with the phantoms as well. His members did at least. He was known throughout his city by the age of fourteen. His name became one that was praised by scumbags and intolerable with those goody goody freaks who seemed too live in his neighborhood. Everyone knew he was Celtic. That was the name he went by anyway. The gang was only established because it gave him an importance that he had never had before. When two parents who should love you are not around, one tends too make due with their own devices and attain that love and affection anyway they could possibly see it. In a world filled too the brim with extraordinary people. He certainly felt above man in his gang. They seemed too be growing in size and it started too attract the attention of actual heroes. Just because he was running an abnormal operation.

By age eighteen he had already procured his fathers institution and planned on leaving the gang for good, too go work with his father and take over the company. However the very gang he helped create and launch seemed too betray him. They had lured him too a hideout that was located in a very dangerous area in the docks. Upon taking him there they originally planned too ditch him there allowing for the cops too come and arrest him. Locking him away in jail, but they had arrived on an unfortunate night. One that would cost them all dearly. Seemed that on this night a dangerous being seemed too be blowing up very volatile chemicals and disposing of them, it was some mad scientist trying too cover his tracks for murdering his entire family. A superhero was there, trying too stop the man from doing his deeds and a heavy battle ensued. The gangsters being caught in the middle. One explosion locked them all inside the warehouse, and two more set off exposing them all too the chemicals. One blurted out how they failed in their plan and was so distraught he explained it all too Severity.

With the betrayal being known, he blacked out only too awaken in the hospital. Seemed his comrades, the main leaders of the gang had died. With their deaths the entire gang crumbled, and yet strange things kept happening too severity. He had discovered that he had strange abilities like those of the men and women that he had worshiped a good most of his life. To him this was the greatest day of his life. He had come into a business proposition that would allow for him too have endless money, and on top of that he was a mutated freak. This was exciting news. Now his plans where coming full circle. He would be able too not only bring the city he was raised in under his rule. But perhaps the world. From then on out he had trained in secret, having too keep his identity a secret he had created a special mask that kept his identity hidden and his voice altered. He had enough money too buy his way out of trouble for the most part. Powerful lawyers. The works. After-all, he had too keep himself active. So with that he took up the guise of Severity. A petty criminal.

Powers:
Ultimate Mimicry Assimilation: By touching a mineral or metal substance one of two things will happen at will upon doing it. He will first always take the properties of the touched mineral turning every particle of his body into the taken substance including his organs and otherwise. Once he has taken the minerals substance and transformed his own being, including his clothing for some reason, he will then be allowed to assimilate into the structure who's properties he has stolen and travel within the confines of that structure at remarkable speeds. This is a versatile ability as it allowed him too avoid the law on more counts then one. After years of honing this ability he has finally come too the point in which he can control it. The time it takes for him too completely fuse with anything that he touches is exactly two turns for the full transformation, and one turn for a limb transformation.

Power Grid:
Normal
Severe Punishment Severity

(-1 EP for Reverting)

Transformation
Severe Punishment Severitytransformed

Travel Form
Severe Punishment Severitytravel

Power Grid Colors:
Purple will indicate the free spaces., White will signify the attained points.

Character Image/Description:
Severe Punishment 7310561-handsome-black-man-in-business-suit-indoor-studio

Severe Punishment 7310561-handsome-black-man-in-business-suit-indoor-studio

Roleplay Sample:
"Edmund. I didn't ask you what you where doing Saturday, I asked you who were you with. Now answer the question." The words would ring forth from Severity and fill the air of the night sky. A group of armed henchmen wearing hyperbolic enhancement suits, allowing for them too take a bit of damage, where holding plasma canons in their hands. Pointing them at the poor business man Edmund Dufort. Seemed that Dufort had been doing something naughty with company funds. Not like that was going too matter soon anyway. Not after Severity found out what he was actually doing.

Severity had on his classic mask. Flipping a lighters lid up and down as his eyes seemed too focus ever so clearly on his target. He would sniff into his mouth and then looked forwards once more. Waiting for the man too answer him. So slow. So slow. It seemed this man before him was either too scared too speak or was too ignorant too reply. Severity found this act too be disrespectful. "Look, Edmund. You have a lovely wife. An, extremely gorgeous daughter. Your house is magnificent and your entire life seems too be going fairly well id say."

His words where on point. Slashing through the ears of his victim. Edmund was bleeding down his mouth from an earlier beating. He seemed too be roughed up badly. And now here they where. Situated upon the roof of the main branch of Tiberius International. The worlds leading Pharmaceutics Corporation. Edmund would mumble out words it seemed, but that was only hindering his case, not really helping it. Severity smirked a bit but no one would know it. That gas mask he wore always hid his expression. He had what many would call a perfect poker-face. Very very useful.

"Okay we stalled long enough. You seem too have the urge too disrespect me. So openly might I add. We no longer have any need for you. I hate too do this. I really do. But I will take care of your family. I assure you of that." He stated his words as his shoe started too look like metal. The steel from the roofs stairway seemed too be sharing its properties with the man. He would make his hand outwards. Palm flat so that his fingers where pointing straight. He pulled off his glove and revealed that he had long nails, which where trimmed specifically too be a sharp object.

"Good-bye Edmund." He would thrust his arm out in a straight fluid motion. It soar through and make contact with the chest of the main. Right through it cleanly. In the hand of Severity lay the heart of Edmund. Who was now in full system shock and cardiac arrest. Dying a painfully excruciating combination of drowning and suffocation. The immediate shock too his now removed heart allowed for an not so instant death. Surely Edmund felt every second of it. Then from out of nowhere. A loud noise was heard. Someone where hear. The screech got louder. It was that....hero.

by The Black Arrow October 14th 2011, 3:53 am

"Powers:
Ultimate Mimicry Assimilation: By touching a mineral or metal substance one of two things will happen at will upon doing it. He will first always take the properties of the touched mineral turning every particle of his body into the taken substance including his organs and otherwise. Once he has taken the minerals substance and transformed his own being, inclunding his clothing for some reason, he will then be allowed to assimilate into the structure who's properties he has stolen and travel within the confines of that structure at remarkable speeds. This is a versatile ability as it allowed him too avoid the law on more counts then one. After years of honing this ability he has finally come too the point in which he can control it."

The first part of this power is fine, but the second part might be a little tricky. First off, we don't allow people to get an increase in their movement speed while using their powers, so you'd move at the same level 1 speed even while inside said material. And secondly, to be allowed to sink into any material you've absorbed is a very powerful ability, and I think should require a split in your EP, and have some kind of drawback. 2 points, and maybe a fusing time, or something like that.

Also, I think you should set your power up like a transformation. Meaning that after you've absorbed a material, you would lose most of your EP, and gain the points back in your physical stats. So if you did -2 for the traveling power, and -1 to 'transform' back, you would have 3 points to subtract from your EP and split between your STR and END.

by **Halite** October 14th 2011, 5:17 am

I think I added all that you wanted.

by The Black Arrow October 14th 2011, 5:42 am

The new Transformation and Travel powergrids look fine, but why does the 'Reverting to normal' one have 6 END and 5 STR?

by **Halite** October 14th 2011, 6:02 am

Because I had no idea where too put the left over points. The Revert would be with 1 ep left over correct? Where would the rest go? xD

by The Black Arrow October 14th 2011, 6:14 am

I think you got a little confused with the whole EP split. Lemme explain it a bit better. You have 6 EP, you -3 to get +3 in your transformation. Then you -2 for your travel form, and then your last point of EP is being spent so you can transform between all these forms. So you don't get those points back, because that last point isn't actually it's own transformation, just the reason you can transform.

by **Halite** October 14th 2011, 7:02 am

So basically get rid of increases on the revert area?

by The Black Arrow October 14th 2011, 7:14 am

Either that, or you can just get rid of it in general and put (-1 to transform) next to EP on your standard grid. Doesn't matter, just as long as everyone can tell what your EP is being used for.

by **Halite** October 14th 2011, 8:41 am

Like that O_<

by The Black Arrow October 15th 2011, 4:44 am

That's good.

Powergrids added. Approved and moved.

by **Arcana** October 24th 2013, 1:54 pm

Moved for edits

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