Shinigami

Shinigami
Death God


Basic Biography


Real Name: Takai Hoshi
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Shinigami
Title: Death God
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Dark Brown
Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 136 lbs.
Blood type: AB-



The Looks


Short hair, Black robes with a white strip of cloth for a belt, sword at waist, and wears a full-face mask which is white except for red stripes on the left side, also wears japanese Straw Sandals with socks



The Legacy


Personality: His personality can be called the normal, except it's very easy to get him mad. He likes to joke around, and he gets happy when fighting. If he wins a fight, he gets sad because it's over. When he's doing nothing, he usually tosses a ball that he keeps in his pocket at someone to keep himself entertained.

History: He was born the 2nd of July, 1989. He discovered most of his powers at a young age, and he found a sword mysteriously under his bed when he was 17, he made the costume himself after he was out of college, he later flew off and wasn't heard from in that state ever since.

He was being followed unknowingly. When he stopped, he was just walking when something hit him, and he blanked out. Later, he woke up and looked around him, where there were others that were wearing costumes as well, they were knocked out and tied to a chair, a Nazi approached and he started to choke one of them, Takai broke the ropes that bound him and hit the Nazi with his sword, which knocked him out, he cut everyone else's ropes and flew away thinking "I might make a good hero!" (Note, I had another story all written, but my computer crashed..)




The Powers


Power 1: Sword Healing, can fix the blade if it breaks, cost 3 AP

Power 2: Pale Fire Crash, sends out 3 fireballs which fly after the enemy, cost 4 AP

Power 3: Flame Blade, the blade becomes a 'solid flame', cost 4 AP

Power 4: Poison Blade, the blade poisons the enemy on hit cost 4 AP

AP = Ability Points

Grid
Intelligence: 0
Occult: 4
Strength: 4
Speed: 4
Durability: 3
Ability: 4
Fighting Skills: 3
Magic: 2
Spells: 4
Flight: 2
Wealth: 1

Shinigami means Death God in Japanese, by the way

Character applications go in the "Hero/Villain Application" section by the way. I went ahead and moved this thread to the appropriate place for you.

If you haven't already, you should look at this post: Welcome to Superhero RPG

It also includes links to other threads you should check out starting out, especially the rules.

Personality and appearance could use some elaborating on, and you do have to include a history for your character.

Each of his powers needs a seperate ability score attached to it. How powerful they is dependent on how many points you put in it. All this is explained in the links provided by the post I linked to earlier. Any stat over 4 is considered superhuman, so you should explain them in your character's history. If you need help after reading the rules and such, hop in the Cbox and someone will take care of you.

Oh, ok, thanks!

The personality is a bit on the short side, and could due for a little improvement in the way of length; also having an unknown history is a bit of a no no. It doesn't have to be a novel, but just a basic overview, not everything has to be included in the history.

This character sounds more magically oriented than intelligence, so I would suggest occult for them. It would allow them to make things like magical weapons, also allowing them to create weapons like the poison sword as well as a sword out of pure flame, unless you want to pay ability for the flame sword.

Pale fire crash would cost at the least 4 ability to use, and the sword healing would also cost around 3 to have.

Flight only goes upto 2, 2 flight being full flight.

This character could also go under the magic system, which would allow them to use all of these powers you have listed in the form of spells if you're willing to try out magic. The link is here if you want to know about the magic system. Once these edits are made, I will look at the character again.

Ok, thank you!