Trench Coat

by Trench Coat June 7th 2013, 3:47 am

Rich Demonto
"I've only met one person that I liked and that liked me. He lives in the mirrors."

Basic Biography

Real Name: Rich Demonto
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Trench Coat
Title:The Druglord
Alignment:Chaotic Evil
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Hair:Long and blonde
Eyes:One eye red, one eye blue.
Height:6' 1"
Weight:170 lbs
Blood type:AB+

The Looks

He Wears a black, knee length trench coat that contrasts his sickly pale skin. He wears no shirt underneath. He wears long dress pants and wears his hair in dreads. His shoes are stolen blue and black converse.

The Legacy

Personality: Any semblance of personality aside from his narcissism is completely drowned out by his unbelievable levels of insanity, which was brought on by his years of heavy substance abuse.

History: His life was a dull boring one where he was hated by everyone and everything except himself. To cope with the world hating him, Rich got heavily into drugs. He eventually worked up his doses until the amounts of heroin he was injecting were ungodly. The drug use not only help keep his pain away, but it also pushed people away. One day, broke and out of money, Rich experimented with a concoction of exotic tree saps in an attempt to get high. This concoction is what gave him his powers.

The Powers

Power 1: Immune to any and all pain.

Power 2: Immune to the harmful effects of drug use (except from those that effect cognitive function and efficiency)

Power 3: Healing factor that can regrow limbs in mere hours.

Power 4: Plant manipulation that can cause full grown plants to sprout up in seconds. Any plants he creates he can control as if they were an extension of himself. His plants are unnaturally durable.

Grid

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Intelligence: 3
Occult:
Strength: 2
Speed: 3
Durability: 7
Ability: 4(Healing Factor)/8(Plant Manipulation)
Fighting Skills: 3
Magic:
Spells:
Flight:
Wealth: 1

by **Chellizard** June 7th 2013, 8:10 am

You lack a photo in your profile, even though you have on in your avatar. Please put the photo in your profile. Also, you lack an in detail history for your character, as well as an in depth personality. It's a profile for OOC reference so people can get a feel of your character; not use it to their advantage. Don't be shy when telling us about your character. The whole point of a character application is to let your character shine, and then you stick them in RP and they shine even more.

But, I would like to add this: the name Trench Coat is very.. odd. Very odd. I'd try to think a little harder and pick a better name.

Everything is almost good when it comes to your powers, except the fact your regeneration needs way more points to do what you want. I'd say 8. But, with 4 you're able to heal smaller wounds, and regrow limbs over the coarse of a few days.

Also, your signature/grid (the photo one you made) shows that you have only 1 Ability bar. It only has the 8 points; you need to have multiple representing the separate powers on the photo grids.

Now, on to the rest of your powers.

The feel no pain one is more an RP mechanic.

The Immune to certain drugs effects is a part of Durability at a certain level; 8 is a safe zone to have that power.

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