My Superhero

by jakester12 August 26th 2012, 9:42 pm

Name: Jake Mourelatos

ID: Static Shock

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Race: White

Hair: Black with purple highlights

Eyes: Brown

Weight: 200

Height: 6'2

Location: N.Y.C

Powers: Static electricity, injury regeneration, faster, smarter, stronger, tougher than the average human

Hobbies: Basketball, baseball, history, drawing, playing the drums, Star Wars, building Legos, skateboarding, listening to heavy rock music

Costume: Black jeans, black shirt, black shoes, black trench coat

History: Lived in N.Y.C all of his life. age 16 and is currently in high school. Lives with his uncle, aunt and cousin. his father is in Afghanistan in the war. His fathers powers are duplicating himself, and seeing things before they can happen. Was born with my powers. My parents are divorced. Unknown location of my mother in the U.S. She left when I was 5. My friends are Vince and Brittney. Sometimes I smoke weed. You may be able to see me at the park skating or shooting hoops. I wear black jeans, band t-shirts, skater shoes, piercings on my ears and lip.

Personalty: dark, quiet, violent, somewhat shy

STR: 3
SPD: 3
END: 4
INT: 5
EP: 7
FS: 7

1 wealthy point

Powergrid: black and white

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by **Chellizard** August 26th 2012, 9:56 pm

First of all, this is double posted.

Second of all, you've posted your app in the incorrect place, and I cannot move it.

Third of all; you're missing his powers.

Your history is too short, and there's little to no personality.

You cannot start off with a level 7 stat. That's listed in the Rules, of course, which I assume you read.

Also, you have 29 points on your grid.

A start grid is only allowed 22.

So..

Try again.