Ren Starbomb (WIP)

Real Name:Ren Starbomb
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name:Ren Starbomb
Title: Bloodred Assassin
Alignment: Neutral
Age:16
Gender:Male
Race:Caucasian
Hair:Red
Eyes:Blue
Height:5" 11
Weight:120

Costume Description/Image: Black and Blue tight shirt, black baggy shorts, studded wristbands

Personality: Nice, he enjoys a good joke. Even though he is humorous, he lost hope when he found out he was abandoned. Knowing that no one truly cared for him, only picking him up off the road as pity. That is where his ruthless murdering attitude came from. Has no qualms about killing someone. As long as the price is right. He will kill.

History: For reasons unknown he was abandoned at the tender age of two. Where he was left to die in the streets of England. Till a pair of two married assassins. Found him. Taking pity they adopted him. Training him in their trade. From martial arts to silent killling. Using his skills he made a living as an assassin even at such a young age. Earning the name Bloodred assassin. Also due to his flaming red hair.

Powers: very flexible, athletic, can run as fast a cheetah. body parts can turn into sharp metal/swords. Can transform into almost anything metal. Can absorb metal he touches to use when powers are in effect.

Power Grid:

When power is in effect


Character Image/Description: 5ft 11, Red hair, tight black and blue shirt, black shorts, tan, blue eyes, spiky hair.

Roleplay Sample: In southern England, in an underground tavern, Ren was trying to order a drink. Although it was illegal, he tried to fake his age by attaching dog hair to his face. Even though they denied a drink, Ren's craving grew stronger for Gin. So, very short and simply, he killed everyone in the bar, including the hookers and prostitutes. ren was a ruthless assassin who didnt give a shit who you were. If you didnt give him what he wanted, he would take it. So on his way home back to his foster parents, he came across a mugger who thought he would just walk up to ren and take the gin. big mistake. Without hesitating, his skin tightened, starting to swirl like a hurricane, until it ripped open showing his metallic skin underneath, as that turned red and flattened into a sharp thin blade. Then ren said sarcastically", Oh no, whatever shall a young chap like me do?" The mugger said ", just stand still, and hand me the gin!" Ren laughed as he stumbled ina blind madness towards the mugger runnin his bloodstained blade through him. "heh, such a waste of my power," Ren said in disgust." Don't be so cocky," said his "father". ren was suprised to see him there, even though he's a professional assassin. Then his father said ", cmon son, lets head home."

When he arrived at his Fathers house, his Father gave quite a conspicuous grin. Ren was a little paranoid when he saw that."So, Ren, I apologize for what i am about to do, I saw you this night slaughtering those innocent people," said his Father.Ren replied sarcasticly ", Father, that wouldn't be trying to kill me would it?"Before his Father could respond, Ren launched spikes from his chest impaling his Father. Ren tried so hard not to cry after learning what he had just done.He smiled and said "My Father taught me not to cry over petty things." So as he left, he burned down the entire hotel, with a sadistic smile on his face.The rest is another, very Tragic, story.

ummmm, no. you cant have an 8 stat, nit even starting out with a 7. Your history is short so is your personality. Also once again no 8 stats ever. try like a 5- 6 speed and maube adding 1 or 2 points to your FS

Stats don't go to 8, it is max 7 in total. But to begin you get only lvl 6 for any stat. History and Personality are way too short, make them at least 1-3 paragraphs worth dude. The metal changing power is also not very good due to having only 1 EP. Oh and your character is also very young so he won't have a lot of power at his hands

Hmm Okay... Well your FS isn't high enough if you've had all that training and I think you need higher Endurance if you're going to be made of metal.

You can lower your EP to 2 and keep your shifting abilities which gives you a point to put onto END or FS .. But unless you want to change your History I'd put it onto FS (:

Annnd what colours do you want the grid?

Un-trashed.

The skin turning into metal is an EP skill, not and END skill, I don't see a problem with it but if an another admin points out the technicality id suggest lowering your END to 2 and putting the extra three points into EP, then just devoting 3 of the points to defense and 2 to attack, but thats only if you have to get technical

Idk, if i listen to you, then it wont get apprved by others because they told me to change one thing and my guy will never get approved

Let me try to clear a few things up for you Bro.

Da Boss was giving you a suggestion on how you could set up your power, because right now your metal power has no effect. If you listen to him you'll get approved, but let me elaborate on his idea a little.

Pretty much Da Boss's was saying that you should lower your durability to have higher EP. However I think it would work better if you lowered your strength and endurance to human level (3), then put all the extra points into your EP. Since you have 2 EP, and 5 strength and endurance right now, that would give you 6 EP.

Then, you would spend 1 EP on your morphing power (turning hands into swords, buzzsaws, spikes, ect.), and all the rest would go into your metal skin power. For each point you put into your metal skin power you can have your Strength or Endurance raised by 1. So if you had 5 EP put into this, once you covered your body in metal you could have +3 STR and +2 END. Or you can have 2+ STR and +3 END. It's up to you, you get to pick how you divide your points, just as long as they only effect those two stats and you don't go over the number of EP you put into the power.

If you still have any questions about how this power would work, feel free to ask so I can help you get approved as soon as possible.

can u show me an idea of how it shoud look
ex:
ep:?
str:?

Hers an example

STR:3
SPD:4
END:3
INT:2
EP: 6
FS: 4
When power is in effect
STR:5
SPD:4
END:6
INT:2
EP: 1
FS: 4
or your grid could be like this
STR:6
SPD:4
END:5
INT:2
EP: 1
FS: 4
Your metal skin ability would be like adding points to your strength, and Dur in exchange for ep I suppose, if you put it in simple terms.

INT:2
STR:3
SPD:4
END:3
EP: 6
FS: 4

And when you cover yourself in metal, you will have an additional +5 points to put in either your STR. or END, you get to pick how their spread out; However, the downside to this power is that whenever you're not covered in metal your slighter weaker then the average character.

Edit: What wally said.

O_O

The easiest way to put is: 5 of your EP would go to having +5 points spread between your strength and toughness. You choose how you divide the points.

I dont understand how your EP drops from 6 to one when your powers are in effect, you use your EP to sustain the power, it would have to remain 6

Arrow said that's how it should be split so that's how it should be split. The 1 EP remaining is for the transformation itself and the other points are divided into strength and durability. Think of it like a werewolf turning from human to...werewolf... and the fact that a werewolf suddenly bulks up, they're stronger, faster, more durable etc. (: It's like a different form.


And Ren, you should get rid of the shooting metal and such and keep with the fact you can turn your arms into chainsaws and such.