Taylor

Real Name: Taylor Harley
SuperHero Name: Halo
Title: The Electric Angel
Alignment: Hero
Age: 15
Gender: F
Race: American
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: green
Height: 5'5
Weight: 120 lbs

Costume Image/Description: Taylor's costume is a suit or armor that was surgically attached to her body when she was young(explained in history). The suit was attached to her containing many different features that she is still learning about(Functions mainly used are explained in powers). As for the actual look of the armor, the back of the armor has a big cross on it and the arms have a cross them, and everything else is the color combo of pink and light brown.

Personality: Taylor is a shy girl because she fears no one would understand her if they knew the real her. She can be brave in the right light and is really kind-hearted but it is the constant fear of being misunderstood that she stays out of many conflicts.

History: Taylor was born into a religious and rich family from San Fransico, California. Taylor was raised to worship God since birth and the first she ever had was a cross. At age 3 however Taylor was kidnapped from her home while the Nanny, that her parents hired for the night, took a nap. Taylor was missing for three years since that night and her parents never gave up on her which payed off in the end because on the anniversary of her kidnapping the police found Taylor abandoned for dead. Eventually things got back to normal and all that had happened seemed liked a bad dream but then tragedy struck the Harley family again when Taylor got caught up in an explosion at age ten. The blast should have killed her but a leading group of scientist created a suit of technological armor that had to be infused with her body to keep her alive. The parents agreed to the procedure and eventually Taylor awoke from the coma she was in and was alive and well but eventually more troubles came to The Harley's. People who saw the way Taylor looked with the suit on her made them look at her like she was a freak and eventually this caused Taylor to start questioning her Faith. Soon when Taylor turned 14 Taylor and her parents agreed that it was best that she set of on her own to try and find others like her that are looked upon as freaks and weirdos to "normal" people. It's been a year since then and Taylor is still looking for others like her.

Powers: Taylor has no true powers of her own so she relys on the powers in her suit to fight. The three main powers that she uses include a sword made from a titanium alloy designed especially for more durable foes,located in her right arm, a gun located in her left arm that will retract into her arm, and a cloaking device that will last for up to a three post period but must then recharge for up to 5 posts or more. While the cloaking device can render Taylor "invisible" to most it has a drawback especially towads electric manipulative superhumans in the fact that the suit sends off small electirc bursts that most humans just think of as static electiricity while it is really the suit reacting to whatever situation Taylor is in. When she is in anger the suit will give off an unsually high jolt of elctricity while if she was just walking through a city block and using it the suit would give off a low jolt that would resemble static eletricity. The intensity just varies on the situation. Any other powers the suit may have Taylor either doesn't use them or hasn't discorvered them.

Power Grid:
STR: 5
SPD: 3
END: 5
INT: 6
EP:
FS: 3

Power Grid colours: Brown and Pink

Character Image/Description: http://www.google.com/m/search?site=images&hl=en&gl=us&source=mog&q=anime+girls+with+blonde+hair&spell=1&ei=dZlQTsjBDIWMNYrMlZgC&ved=0CBQQBSgA#i=0

Even if you didn't make the suit, you need to have an intelligence appropriate for power grid purposes. The weapons and gadgets will be limited by whatever you set your intelligence. It feels like you should lower your Strength by one and your speed by two to give yourself a 6 intelligence to support the weapons and cloaking device.

A three day period is too long for a cloaking device, even if it does have a five day recharge. Make it more relative to a topic. Three posts followed by five posts of recharge seems more doable.

Ok ill fix that

Fixed

Flawless cloaking isnt allowed, it has to have some sort of drawback, something that would allow a person to notice you or pierce the cloaking ability even if you had it up

Fixed