Guardian Angel, Prince of Eden.

Deep into the cosmos, far away from the milkyway galaxy, lies a wonderful world. The world is filled with light, clouds, and winged humenoids. The world is called, Eden.

For thousands of years the Edonians, or as the Humans once called them, Angels, flourished in their bright and holy civilization. Until the Infernals invaded and left the King and Queen with the choice of sending their only son, Zenith, away.

Birth Name: Prince Zenith of Eden
Earth Name: Maxwell Price
Allias: The Guardian Angel
Earth Job: Incestment banker.
Age: 25
Hight: 5'10"
Weight: 150lbs
Hair color: Golden, blonde
Eye color: Sky blue, Gold when powered up.
Face: Because he is the Price of Angels, women of Earth think of him as a handsome man.
Body type: Average, with two great white Angel Wings
Powers: Flight, Super speed, Angelic strength, healing, and Golden energy blasts.
Costume: Feathered mask, white suit with a yellow triangle that goes down from the neck, and a Yellow cross Symbol on the chest.
Alliance: Hero
Enemies: Dr. Eldist, Lord Varrock

Bio:
Prince Zenith, son of Dygon and Lilliani, was destined for greatness. His father knew he would be the greatest Hero Eden has ever seen. King Dygon also thought the birth of his son would bring peace on Eden for another Generation, he was wrong. Soon after the birth of Zenith, the Infernals invated the gass giant. Led by the monster, Lord Varrock, the Infernals caused devistation and chaos among the Angel world. The Royals feared for the future of the Angelic Kingdom, which started with the infant prince. They came to the decision to send him away, and the picked the one planet they knew would accept him, Earth.

Zenith's arrival on Earth was spontanious, he appeared on the doorstep of William, and Susan Price. Ass soon as they saw his wings they knew what he was, and they took him in as their own. Zenith, now named Maxwell Price, was always told to conceal his wings because people were too judgmental to accept him. But his parents never lied to him about what he was, they said he was the child of heaven.

Later in his life, Maxwell became one of Pentagon City's greatest banker, and the citizens loved him for it. Her was helping people before he became a hero. One day, he went to the rooftop for some air and he saw someone on the freeway, swerving out of control. He had to do something. Thinking fast, Maxwell took of his shirt to let his great wings out, wrapped it around his face to conceal his identity, and lept off the roof. Maxwell was souring through the air with great speeds and made it to the car within a few seconds. He got in back of the car and used his Edonian strength to lift it up, set it down somewhere safe, and flew away before saying a word. Later that evening the report on the local news showed the man Maxwell just saved in an interview. When asked who saved him, the man replied, "My Guardian Angel."

Hope this is good, If the bio is tough to read, I understand. I rushed through it.

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Powers: There is a limit, do not go overboard with this, the strength of your powers are determined by the level of your energy projection. This does not include physical powers, such as strength, speed, endurance, fighting skills or anything pertaining to it, etc. Please be very detailed on your powers and their descriptions, don't be sloppy and make something stupid, think it through and do a good job, these will be important!

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Try filling this out, it would work better.

And unless the rule has changed, angels and demons are banned.

An alien that is really painfully like an angel.

Well, Ironman is painfully like a robot, but he's a man in a suit.

Power Grid:
STR: 5
SPD: 5
END: 2
INT: 2
EP: 6
FS: 2


Roleplay Sample: A woman walkes into a dark ally on a late night in Pentagon city. The ally is riddled with trashcans and a few ally cats. The woman is cold and scared of the narrow dark pass. "Hey baby," says a grizzled, scruffly looking man, "You want to give me that purse?" The woman turned around to walk the other way when three other men appeared. She was surrounded. The woman screamed as they drew closer and a flash of gold light broke the darkness. One of the muggers fell, another flash, another one fell, then it happend a third time. Only the first mugger was left. "Who are you!?" he yelled into the night sky. All he could here was flapping, then he saw the glowing gold eyes. Another flash of light, and he went down. The winged man looked at the woman, "Are you alright?" He said in a soft, soothing voice. The woman nodded as all the fear melted away like ice on a hot day. "Who are you?" She asked. The man came into the radius of the street light, to give her a look. "I'm The Guardian Angel." In a burst of golden light, the Guardian Angel took off to the skies.

I'm giving him an Angelic look because thats the way to people view him. I say Angelic because he is like an angel, but he is not a biblical figure he is an Alien who is from a world that is like the biblical Angel's realm. I have to make it out that he's an angel to give a picture of what he has become in the eyes of the people.

Okay, this is promising so far.
Unfortunately, it isn't complete.

How defined are his powers? What is his personality like?


I'm going to have to ask that you copy the official template that Wally posted and then edit your first post to fit that before I can officially review this character.

Trashed. Any mod can un-trash it for you if you ever come back.