my triumphant return

Real Name:Derek Dawn
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name:Blood Wraith
Title:Demon of the Dark, and does Insane count?
Alignment:Renegade
Age:28
Gender:Male
Race:Human/mutant
Hair:white
Eyes:silver
Height:6 foot 1
Weight:215

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Personality: The years of killing have drove this man to the brink of insanity , And that no matter what he will always come out on top because of that. He is also very skilled in the art of trash talk and won't hesitate to let you know, infact it is almost impossible to get him to shut up at times.

History:Dereks mother was born just outside of the radioactive town Chernobyl, this is where she spent most of her childhood and brought many strange and yet brilliant happenings into her life, although it was a short one. The birth of Derek Dawn brought her life to an end. Derek spent many of his years in an orphanage in Chicago. His life was fairly normal untill his tenth birthday where he had notice he was not easily injured. Years later he began his career as a U.S. Navy Seal. Derek's life as a SEAL led him into Russia running a black ops mission just outside of Moscow where he was captured by a Terrorist group know as the Devil Saints. Two years worth of experimenting led to greatly enhancing his healing factor and making his skin almost unpiercable in which he used to excape from this hell that he knew as home for the last couple of years. Now he has made it back to America where he plans to get even with everyone that happened to let him down.

Powers: Blood Wraith has a very complex healing factor and a great ability to comprehend the sitiuations he gets himself in. His skills as an Ex Navy Seal have yet to let him down. His ability to use a martial art skills and the ability to use a gun was greatly amplified with the experiments ran on him. He also has a very strong bone structure and skin supliment allowing him to get the advantage on unsuspecting foes.
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Roleplay Sample: It had been the first time Derek had been back in the states since the secret war with Russin almost ten years back. He had no idea how things would look when he got back and now that he is here in New York he is amazed with all the technology that surronds him. His first mission on hand is to find his surviving troops and appoligize for what had happened that day. The only problem with that is finding them without setting off anyones radar. He is dead to everyone and he wanted to keep it that way. A life of secrecy seemed better considering the monster he had been turned into.

He couldnt help but notice the abilities he had walked away with that day his healing power was greatly amplified, not to mention his martial arts ability is off the charts. His reflexes are astounding he couldnt believe it. he was given a gift and intended to use it to get what he wanted most the head of Eric Pardin the man who did this to him. The man who took him away from his family and forced him to do things he wish he could of restrained himself from doing.

"why did the writer have to make my life so screwed up...why couldn't i be like any other superhero and just fall into a radioactive pool or bit by a radioactive animal of somesort....I've got it he hates me thats it...you hate me don't you."

Blood Wraith pauses but gets no response he looks annoyed at his insanity but knows everything he does is being typed in the second he does it. Why wont anyone believe him.
Derek stops at a phone booth thumbing through a phone book....nothing none of his team mates were listed. This hit him hard how will he begin his new life what will happen to him.

Is the healing ability a passive regenerative factor? And you have super speed, you should put that under your powers. Your powers are simple and I have no problem with them.

You never said how you were given your powers in your history. It is also very vague and could use work.

I don't like the idea of you being insane and thinking you're on a forum. I don't want characters like Deadpool in that sense, that'd suck the fun out of it.

Your character image link is broken. Your hair and eyes cannot be unknown; you know what they look like.

Do you use the weapons in your costume picture? If so, explain them in this application or an item application.

dont use the weapons in the costume pick just liked the basic look of the costume

I'd like to bouche for Blood by saying that when he first applied for this forum with the character, about 3 months or so ago, a bit before Chapter 4, he was told his character was just fine as long as he kept it different enough from Deadpool. His insanity has worked out fine, and the thinking he's a character in a written prose just adds to the insanity.

All in all, I'm saying he's a pretty good Rper, his character has been approved and worked previously, and I don't see why the character shouldn't be approved again.

Approved.