Night Hunter

Real Name: Yusuke Fujiwara
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Night Hunter
Title:
Alignment: Hero
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5.2 feet
Weight: 88 lbs

Costume Description/Image:
Personality: Yusuke is very smart person. He’s very caring person but if there’s an enemy he will kill it if he has to. He was always good at games like chess. Yusuke doesn’t like being with many people.

History: When he was at school his grades were good and after each day of school he trained mastering pyrokinesis and martial arts like karate. when he was sixteen he got black belt in karate when he was 18 years old his parents got killed by some unknown mafia, Yusuke got everything that his parents had money and big house. He started building his own hero costume and dubbed himself as Night Hunter. As Night Hunter he fought against crime and corruption. when he was twenty he almost got killed by a villain but survived the fight and saved his city.

Powers: Pyrokinesis, superstrength
Yusuke’s Pyrokinesis can only manipulate his own flames that he creates by concentrating the flames to appear attached to his hands then he can make them bigger or smaller and then by throwing them at his target.
His superstrength is one that he can control at highest power he can punch through any stone metal or steel.


Power Grid:
STR: 4
SPD: 3
END: 3
INT: 4
EP: 5
FS: 3

Character Image/Description: He wears a black hoodie (when he's not fighting against villains)
and jeans.

Roleplay Sample: Yusuke was walking at the streets of new york city everything was calm he had nothing to worry about. Nobody knew he was Night Hunter and it was good that way if somebody knew that he couldn’t walk around the streets like this. Hour later he was at the gym training he needed to be in good shape.

Day later there was invitation to a fight club on his desk which read “Come to the Nexus night club and show this letter if you want to participate. prize 5,000$ for winning the tournament” it was 8:00 pm he decided to fight in the club. He parked his car near the club building and looked at the club not too bad looking place. He walked towards the door and soon was stopped by guards and one of the guards said “do you have the permission to enter?” “Oh you mean the letter? Yeah” Yusuke showed the guards the letter he got and then they let him in.

The place was full of people and at the right side of the room was a door and in the front wall was a TV screen showing current match that was going on two people were fighting in a ring one of the guys was knocked out and was taken out to fix his wounds. the TV screen displayed the victors name. His turn was next “Yusuke Fujiwara please get in the ring when you are ready to fight!” narrator said. He walked through the door and saw a white room with a ring just like in the screen.

Yusuke stepped in the ring and right after that a man with beard came from the door from another side of the room. The man stepped into the ring and said “Even if you are newbie here I won’t go easy on you! You Better be prepared!” this man was foolish he didn’t know who he was messing with. Yusuke kicked the guy right in the head with his superstrenght he felt the mans nose break. he lowered his leg and saw the guy holding his nose with his right hand and saw blood coming from between his fingers the man tried to punch Yusuke with left hand and almost hit Yusuke. Yusuke punched the man in the stomach the victory was his.

Seems OK. However, 4 superstrength is defined as this-


4 – Superhuman: This person is superhuman, either by mutation or experimental means. They can lift over a ton, up to 200 tons

One thing I saw in your history is that you said you became a black belt in karate, well these is a small problem, but 4 Fighting Skills means you've mastered one art of combat, and have minor training in another. You only have 3 Fighting Skills.

Other than that your character doesn't have any problems that I see. The only tip I would give you, is you could go more in-detail with your history. You can explain what happened to your parents a little bit better, and also tell the story of how you saved your city from the villain.

SpikeSkiba wrote:4 Fighting Skills means you've mastered one art of combat, and have minor training in another.

That's not 100% true. Entropus has 4 Fighting Skills and mastered far more than just 1 style of combat. 3 Fighting Skills seems fair to me when it comes to being a black belt.

Well I just thought that 4 FS seemed just a little low for a master black belt . But if you think he is fine with 3 FS, thats enough for me. If your 100% finished and they'res nothing you wanna edit, Approved.

I see no problem with this application. Approved and moved. I will also add you to the hero group. 4 FS is not too low for a black belt. It's more than enough. 4 – Well-Trained: This person has mastered one style of fighting to its fullest. This person has great fighting capabilities and an average person doesn’t stand a chance for more than 30 seconds.

Apparently he's making a new character and trashing this one. Least that's what I got out of our conversation.


If I'm wrong, tell me man and I'll move it back.