Night Rage

by MetalBeyondDeath November 22nd 2010, 2:21 pm

Real Name: Mark Morton
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name: Night Rage
Title: Abysmal Dawn
Alignment: Neutral ((does whatever he feels like))
Age: Died at 22 ((can't age anymore))
Gender: Male
Race: Undead
Hair: Black
Eyes: Gray
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 200 Lbs.

Costume Description/Image: http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=goth&order=9&offset=24#/djqx8n

Personality:
- Quick To Anger
- Twisted Sense Of Humor
- Modest
- Always Willing To Fight For The Underdog
- Loves Music
- Hates Being Judged
- Refuses To Die Again
- Tends To Second Guess Himself

History: Born a metal head and an Outcast his whole young life, Music was the only thing Mark ever had that made him happy. His family was abusive and could care less what he did leaving him to raise himself. Never liking the mainstream popular music he decided that the only way to make music for others like him was to take things into his own hands. Quickly picking up the guitar and metal vocals Mark finally found some form of family with his band Thousand Ashes. Eventually becoming good enough for there first concert Mark got so overly excited that once on stage and rocking hard he stage dived only not to be caught and having his skull caved in. Awaking in hell by The Devil himself he was given the chance to Rock once again amongst the living but under the rules that whenever the devil called Mark had to answer. Now back on earth Mark still rocks but has powers through his guitar and vocals that he uses to do whatever he wants unfortunately the devil decided Not to bring Mark back entirely human he is a skeleton and is only kept alive by a guitar that hangs from a chain where his heart use to be if removed he will die instantly. His main weakness is he tends to second guess himself and not go through with what he starts

Powers:All of his powers come from his guitar and vocals
Playing the right notes on his guitar he can turn his whole body into a nearly indestructible metal.
Can send a high powered screech from his guitar to send enemies flying.
Can summon fire straight from hell it's self to use as either a shield or a powerful blast.
Guitar is made of A rare metal that can cut through almost anything and anyone besides Mark who touches it is poisoned.
Can sing an eerie melody that summons three undead zombies that fight until there destroyed and sent back to hell.((can only summon one at a time.))
Good in hand to hand combat though he prefers to stay away from it.
Can telepathically talk and command his zombies.
Slightly faster at healing than a normal human and can regenerate lost limbs over a period of time.

PowerGrid:
Intelligence: 3
Strength: 3
Speed: 4
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 6
Fighting Skills: 3

Zombie 1 -- Onikamaru
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=warrior#/d2n44x9

A japanesse warrior who relies on brute force.
Heavily armored but been dead for a long time so his body has greatly degraded so it would really only take two or three solid hits to kill him.

Intelligence: 1
Strength: 4
Speed: 2
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 0
Fighting Skill: 2

Zombie 2 -- BoneMind
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=demon%20mage&order=9&offset=0#/d13tyrh

A demonic mage who blasts dark orbs that drain the energy of the target to heal him and his master and capable of flight.
Fast And Very Acrobatic so hard too hit but one good shot and he's dust.

Intelligence: 2
Strength: 1
Speed: 4
Durability: 1
Energy Projection: 3
Fighting Skill: 0

Captain James Vildro
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=soldier&order=9&offset=48#/d2x6xel

A soldier who has a automatic rifle that can second as a sniper with armor penetrating rounds and several grenades plus well trained in hand to hand combat.
Somewhat of a combination between the other two harder to hit and skilled in hand to hand but can only take two hits till he's out.

Intelligence: 1
Strength: 3
Speed: 3
Durability: 2
Energy Projection: 0
Fighting Skill: 3

Roleplay Sample: "Alright guys you ready" a sweaty and anxious Mark asks his just as nervous band members only to get a head shake in return from all four members. "Thanks for that confidence boost well i guess there's nothing to do but to get out there!." Nervously steeping out onto the stage Mark feels his stomach crawl up to his throat as he stands akwardly in the middle of the stage gazing out at the crowd not entirely sure what to say, Quickly gathering his thoughts and remembering all of the people who told him he could never do this or get nearly this far he screamed at the top of his lungs " WE ARE THOUSAND ASHES!!"

by Guest November 22nd 2010, 3:26 pm

I don't matter much here coming and going like a wraith myself. This character not OP seems to have some faults. The indestructible part for one. I be careful with that one as some will see it as god modding. Another thing if you use all this like you say your Energy projection must be 6. You have a good mind to maker something like this but also you must be careful how you rp with him. Lastly anyone can die so refusing to die is iffy. It's a good character with a few flaws.

Trust me i speak from experience, My character nuke was OP as hell able to cause a nuclear explosion when fully charged. Way too powerful and no faults so one Power lover to another tone it down just a little.

by MetalBeyondDeath November 22nd 2010, 3:41 pm

I totally get what your saying but he's not indestructible he only has to have the chain that is where his heart use to be to die I probably should have been more detailed about that so i apologize and okay i will change his stats. Also where it says he refuses to die it just means that he's willing to fight like hell and is very determined to stay alive now that he has a second chance

by Guest November 22nd 2010, 3:44 pm

Well that's everyone. So just fix up those dead zones and your good in my book. But like I said I don't matter much since i come and go.

by MetalBeyondDeath November 22nd 2010, 3:45 pm

Ok thanks man

by **Bash** November 22nd 2010, 6:13 pm

I second wolf, (OMG WTF) The cutting through almost anything and being almost indestructible will not be accepted. Otherwise it can be broke by tanking out EVERY fight. Granted, I do understand that you do want to tank some stuff out, you will need to be hurt in some aspect. I will list some suggestions soon below. You would need to move that speed to endurance to accompany a power that tough.

As for suggestions, make it say something along the lines of for example:

-Tougher than a military tank/sharp enough to cut through most metals
-Duration time limit
-Physical inversion flaw: Tough armor=poor speed or something.
-activation time/concentration...

lets take it from there