Blood Wraith

Real Name:Derek Dawn
Super Hero/Villain/Renegade/etc Name:Blood Wraith
Title: Does Insane count?
Alignment:Hero
Age:28
Gender:Male
Race:Human/mutant
Hair:unknown
Eyes:unknown
Height:6 foot 1
Weight:215

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Personality: The years of killing have drove this man to the brink of insanity he believes that he is in a roleplaying forum, And that no matter what he will always come out on top because of that. He is also very skilled in the art of trash talk and won't hesitate to let you know, infact it is almost impossible to get him to shut up at times.

History:Derek Dawn lived a strange child hood filled with odd happenings his mother died giving birth to him. By the age of 7 he couldn't be harmed he would be vitaly cut and the wound would heal right before the surgeons eye's. At the age of 21 Derek decided to join the Navy and hone his self defense skills. With in the next two years he had made cournal and was sent over see's on a reconisis mission in communist russia. America was unaware that they knew he was comming .

Derek was abducted never to be seen again he was listed MIA within the first 2 months. The years of torture and experiments drove him insane
Powers: Blood Wraith has a very complex healing ability and a great ability to comprehend the sitiuations he gets himself in. His skills as an Ex Navy Seal have yet to let him down. His ability to use a martial art skills and the ability to use a gun was greatly amplified with the experiments ran on him
PowerGrid:strength:3
speed:5
Endurance:3
energy projection: 4
Intelligence:3
fighting skills:4

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Roleplay Sample: It had been the first time Derek had been back in the states since the secret war with Russin almost ten years back. He had no idea how things would look when he got back and now that he is here in New York he is amazed with all the technology that surronds him. His first mission on hand is to find his surviving troops and appoligize for what had happened that day. The only problem with that is finding them without setting off anyones radar. He is dead to everyone and he wanted to keep it that way. A life of secrecy seemed better considering the monster he had been turned into.

He couldnt help but notice the abilities he had walked away with that day his healing power was greatly amplified, not to mention his martial arts ability is off the charts. His reflexes are astounding he couldnt believe it. he was given a gift and intended to use it to get what he wanted most the head of Eric Pardin the man who did this to him. The man who took him away from his family and forced him to do things he wish he could of restrained himself from doing.

"why did the writer have to make my life so screwed up...why couldn't i be like any other superhero and just fall into a radioactive pool or bit by a radioactive animal of somesort....I've got it he hates me thats it...you hate me don't you."

Blood Wraith pauses but gets no response he looks annoyed at his insanity but knows everything he does is being typed in the second he does it. Why wont anyone believe him.
Derek stops at a phone booth thumbing through a phone book....nothing none of his team mates were listed. This hit him hard how will he begin his new life what will happen to him.

Haha someone who breaks the fifth wall. always funny.

This is fine except you need a powergrid. Just write it out.

You have 22 points across:

strength:
speed:
Endurance:
energy projection: (This includes super healing)
Intelligence:
fighting skills:

You may not go above 6 in any stat, 6 is your limit.

Btw how is this guy a hero? seems more villainy.

well he's kinda on wich ever side pays him the most

strength:3
speed:5
Endurance:3
energy projection: 4
Intelligence:3
fighting skills:4

Ironically there is a fifth wall lol.

Dammit ive been up too late

meant the forth wall...

Well here it technically is the fifth wall.

I just realized this is almost EXACTLY like deadpool... the fourth wall comment made me realize that. this would not be allowed.

It is clearly in the rules stated below rule number 3 read it.

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If you dont click that here is a copy paste.

3. THIS IS NOT A MARVEL OR DC BASED SITE! Do not reference either in your applications, be this names of powers(i.e. Spider-sense), materials(i.e. adamantium, vibranium), or people(no fucking Marvel or DC characters). If I see these things I will tell you to remove them or change them and bash the hell out of your character. I also will state here, do not make replicas of people from video games, movies, or mangas. You can use their picture, but please do not make copies. Take Lullith for example. She is obviously based on Lulu from FFX but Atreyuvision made a point to distance her from the franchise. I will not accept mere name changes, I want at least semi-original characters here please.

Im not the biggest fan of superheroes, in fact I dont know much at all. but I knew deadpool from knowing how the fourth wall works...

yes but deadpool uses the fourth i mixed the terminology.

so i can't base my character off him what so ever i'm not using anything from him except the fourth wall thing and choice in weapon

Well the similarities are

1. both mercs
2. both have super healing
3. both have mental issues.
4. both have been experimented on to make them superhuman.
5. same pic.
6. fourth wall thing.
7. same weapons both sword and gun
8. both assassins.
9. both really good at martail arts

Seems waaaayyy to similar.

Definitely too similar.

is there anything i can do to keep the basic outline, maybe change the pic and the costume and the assassin thing maybe make him an ex Navy Seal wich would make him good with a gun and sword and war would provide him with the mental issues

Well there we go, thats a better way to go.

and to add the mental issues causes him to ramble and it just "happens" to break the fourth wall.

let me see the edit and we'll see.

This is fine now. so its dare devil now... i guess you wanted a red jumpsuit... Its okay. It is perfectly legal to have a pic of something for looks only.

Edit in a written powergrid and youre good to go.

ok i was hoping it would work ok and yes i like red.....tehe