Zero the superhero

by Ewanesloco August 3rd 2016, 10:00 am

CHARACTER NAME
CHARACTER TITLE OR QUOTE

Basic Biography

Real Name: Kevin Foster
Renegade/Hero/Villain Name: Zero
Title:
Alignment: Neutral Good
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: White
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Height: 6.2
Weight: 185
Blood type: O-

The Looks

Either include pictures in Spoilers, a smaller picture/s for the profile, or a very detailed description of your characters physical appearance and costume.

The Legacy

Personality: My personality is very calm, i don't get angry and can be very nice towards others, im very empathetic/sympathetic and can be kind even to my enemies.

History: I grew up in a small town in North Carolina, I was very shy throughout elementary school through high school and did not make many friends. In college I started to blossom and became very outgoing and friendly towards others and got a degree in nursing. I worked in a hospital until one night a very sick person came in. I was the one to care for him and eventually i contracted what he had. The person died the next morning so I became very scared. I was lying in a hospital bed when a man came in my room and said he could get rid of what I had for free. I was reluctant so I said yes. It was a trap, i was taken to an unknown place and was being forced to be in painful experiments. Eventually my powers contracted from such pain and I got out of the restraints and escaped the harsh place. I now live in Washington DC and live in a decent area and am still nursing, but desperately wants to become a superhero.

The Powers and Weaknesses

(All characters can be as powerful as they want, as long as they are balanced with proper weaknesses.)
Powers

Power 1: My 1st power is the ability to make force fields.

Power 2: My 2nd power is my increased senses, im now very agile and tense.

Weakness(es)

Weakness 1: One of my weaknesses is that i'm considered emotionally weak and I often can't complete a mission if were having to kill a person because all life is precious.

Weakness 2: My second weakness is that I my powers have great strain after a while and i can pass out if I dont rest, also when I get tired my fields can often be broken with a little bit of force.

RP Mechanics

RP Mechanic(s):

Items/Minions

Physical Priority
(You are to put these physical attributes in order from 1 to 4. 1 is the highest priority, 4 is the lowest.)
Agility 2
Endurance 1
Reaction 3
Strength 4

by **Chellizard** August 3rd 2016, 10:17 am

Okay, for starters, First Person is really bad for role playing.

It can be done, but it's not fun reading other people's posts and it going "I did this, and I did this, and then I did this." If you get what I mean.

Secondly, your personality, history, power descriptions, and just overall lack of information makes me not interested in this character.

Add more details.

I suggest you look at other apps [I have 8 linked in my signature] to get a better grasp on what is approved.

Thirdly, you can have as many powers as you want, so long as there is an equal weakness that is tangible and exploitable be it physically or mentally.

Aka, 1 to 1 ratio of Power to Weakness.

by Ewanesloco August 3rd 2016, 10:38 am

Im sorry the application sucked, never done this before and just didn't know what was what.

by Sponsored content

Zero the superhero

Zero the superhero

Re: Zero the superhero

Re: Zero the superhero

Re: Zero the superhero